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Have you changed the whole novel? Will you do the same on this ?

Sorry for the 1 star review but the novel is alteady being translated, The true problem is that you dont say its a translation.

"Ever since before" ? Before need to be removed no ?

Hello, there is a few problem that came from the lack of writing experience.First make sure to separate two different persons who talk also better use "" Ex:Jack (hello) natsumi (hello)ToJack : "Hello"Natsumi : "Hello"Also use gramarly or chatgpt or anything to check the text. Good luck with the following story.

Yeah the few first chapter was similar and came to check if other knew it well I hope author can respond to that ?I don't care if the beginning is a copy but the "man of the House" had a big flaw the author liked way too much drama and all is book were drama on drama.

Nope he talking about the settings but he wouldn't have been able to help her then

I want to be clearer on the quality, it's way more readable than most mtl and as I said there is only one recurring miss. It's almost spotless. Truly a good job .

The story is good. Nothing new to the genre but well executed. The trad is uneven, In fact it's MTL and that work 95% Of the time and it's pleasing to read. The only problem is with "gun" translate by "wooden something". A bit disappointing because it's almost the only problem. Keep in mind that it's free. Thanks for the trad I passed a good time.

First time I review without reading any chapter. The synopsis is quite funny and the last phrase caught me so I don't care get your star.

Overall a really good fanfic ,well written a bit cringe /silly but not unbearable, that even add a good mood while reading. I think you should not hesitate to expand the harem (not disproportionate and not pokeharem). But with the pace of the story there is no problem. Please don't set yourself a limit especially if there will be another universe after it. (yeah I have a preference for big harem:) everything is in the pace also I love the pov chapter. The only default is the gap in the last updates. A bit scared that it will slowly be longer and longer. Thanks to the author, just don't forget that there will always be people who trash talk /dislike your choice but ultimately it's your stories. Good luck with the following.