I'd give it a 3/5 if it wasn't for the poor character design of the MC, and the development of the story itself lacking. I found myself skipping through paragraphs each chapter simply because they weren't entertaining and couldn't keep me focused on them. The story itself, from the 30 chapters I read, focused more on everything else than it did the MC and his own character development, which, in my opinion, destroys the entire purpose of the first bit of chapters which are typically used to introduce most characters, and show character development to the MC. The chapters themselves felt like they kept getting shorter and shorter, with like almost nothing interesting happening at all during the first 30 chapters. Overall, just a bad story, poorly thought out imo.
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I thought about this too, and the protagonist is meant to have more on-screen time but then what would be the foundation of the story? Considering the story is easily going to be 1000+ chapters, I was in no hurry to give him too much screen time while neglecting core characters or that would prove to be unrealistic in a sense. The story had to temporarily circle around those that exist in that world already to set the tempo as there's little to nothing Tyr can realistically do not only at that age but being new to that world overall. Tyr gets more screen time in the war arc, that's where he really begins to shine as this is a slow paced story. It beats it being fast paced with tons of loopholes The story is slow paced, and picks up at the war arc because once again, I'm in no rush with the story and the events that happen in these chapters play a pivotal role in future chapters. For now, it's still the era of the older generation, and I cannot neglect one to focus on another. There's never one way to tell a story. While I do respect your opinion, I would have to disagree as this story was well thought out, you would draw the same conclusion if you read further but if you want to hop off at this point. A big thank you for reading, and I will definitely take this review into consideration.
The only times you really mentioned the Mc at all was in the beginning, and then you instantly hit them with a time skip. During that timeskip, he was being trained, and you showed nothing of the training. The only thing that was really mentioned was what he "didn't teach him" (throwing dirt in eyes) / Then it completely starts focusing on everything else. The early years of the MC is typically where the most character development happens in stories where it starts when the MC is a kid, ESPECIALLY since he was being trained by his father at that point. /// I understand it's a "slow paced story" and everything, but this is a bit too much negligence for my liking. /// I don't know how you're going to make this a 1000+ chapter novel without just dragging everything out and making it boring. It's already boring within the first 50 chapters lol.
Don't get me wrong, I see where you're coming from. I agree with some of these but once again, it's clash of opinions so there's no right or wrong in this case. I think everyone is entitled to their opinion because what you like, another might not like it and so forth. But I will definitely take this into consideration and I appreciate you taking time out to type this as well. You can check out my other book about heroes, I think that fits your taste better.
ours without a doubt keeps getting better how is it possible? really a hidden gem! if you find a way to spread the word and keep making the story interesting just success!😁 (please don't put ntr it will ruin this masterpiece)
Well, hello there! I would appreciate it if you could drop your own review for the culture and after you have read enough, I want to hear your opinion about the book. Don't worry, no NTR
It one of the reason I drop this before
Yo author is this based on the Viking’s tv show?
No, it's based on the actual person known as Ragnar Lothbrok but I did take inspiration from Viking amongst many other Viking related shows.
