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Also it’s my fault you got mixed up I used “phrase” instead of “sentence” so my bad on that front.
Ahh no sorry I couldn’t quite remember the paragraph so I didn’t specify but it was about the not being discovered and how only his sister knows about his eyes. It’s repeated twice in one paragraph who knows about his eyes etc, I hope I’m not coming off as rude, I don’t mean to be if I am just trying to help.
Wannabe narrator head ahhh
Unless it’s a greatsword I see this as a complete waste of their body strength, they need something heavy that has impact, not a sword.
I know it’s a bit late to say it now but you’re repeating phrases quite often. Ex: this paragraph. I’m not sure if it’s different further down the line or if someone else already pointed it out but I just thought I’d let you know.
Dumbass Mf do you expect him to call a King he just met by his first name????
Been loving these chapters author, keep them coming and I’ll happily keep reading 😆