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DaynightdreamerAuthor2yr
2023-01-28 16:15

hi there, kinda shameless for an author to review their own book(nervously laughs). Well, I shamelessly gave myself all stars on world background and character design. This is because while I struggle in a lot of areas in writing (fight scenes) pppsch who said that? I try to make my characters not only the MC but also the side characters seem as wholesome as possible, to have a personality that people can actually remember them even 50 chapters later and I hope I did that with this book. The cases featured in this novel some will be cultivation tropes and others will be a little unique. Also just as a heads-up the novel also features multiple POVs..It's hard to just sit in the courtroom when there's a whole world out there. Who knows what might be cooking? Anyhow, I hope you enjoy the novel as much as i enjoy writing it and potentially get Yang Qing in trouble.

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rishit1Lv4

romance??

DaynightdreamerAuthor

As a minor tag maybe but I'm not too sure I'll go that deep into it

rishit1:romance??
FallenAngeILv13

If it isn't brainless romance than it can really enchance the story and give it a diffrent favour in the long run, so I think it's better to include it, but it's all up to you.

Daynightdreamer:As a minor tag maybe but I'm not too sure I'll go that deep into it
FallenAngeILv13

Will the MC go out to explore or will we only see the outside world through other POVs?

DaynightdreamerAuthor

he does go out on occasion when conducting his other duties, so you'll definitely see him out

FallenAngeI:Will the MC go out to explore or will we only see the outside world through other POVs?
ImmortalDoggoLv4

Author, you should reduce or completely not use filler chapters and useless sidetrack details that is not relevant to the overall plot of your story to make it more interesting.

prakhar_saxenaLv4

just one question since yang Qing already broke through 2jd stage of palace realm during promotion arc so why does all the chapters ahead mention him to be in 1st stage of palace realm

DaynightdreamerAuthor

he hasn't broken through to the second stage , he is still in the first stage ..has been for a year

prakhar_saxena:just one question since yang Qing already broke through 2jd stage of palace realm during promotion arc so why does all the chapters ahead mention him to be in 1st stage of palace realm
prakhar_saxenaLv4

its clearly mentioned he broke through to 2nd stage during his fight in palace coirt promotion arc you can read that part again.

Daynightdreamer:he hasn't broken through to the second stage , he is still in the first stage ..has been for a year
DaynightdreamerAuthor

Reread chapter 240, please..it's the only time i mentioned his cultivation base before the ceremony , his cultivation base grew but not to the second stage

prakhar_saxena:its clearly mentioned he broke through to 2nd stage during his fight in palace coirt promotion arc you can read that part again.
prakhar_saxenaLv4

chapter 258 its mentioned he even acheved a smooth breakthrough to level 2 after defeating his opponent with the help of saint grade artifact

Daynightdreamer:Reread chapter 240, please..it's the only time i mentioned his cultivation base before the ceremony , his cultivation base grew but not to the second stage
DaynightdreamerAuthor

oh yeah, just saw it, that's an oversight on my part ...he shouldn't have been at the second stage at the time, I've re-edited it.

prakhar_saxena:chapter 258 its mentioned he even acheved a smooth breakthrough to level 2 after defeating his opponent with the help of saint grade artifact
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