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ImmortalDoggo
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2023-07-09 05:50

Too much details, it's too irritating to read, please author, reduce the details by removing the unecessary ones and only focus on the plot, chapter 27 in but the plot doesn't forward at all, over 10 chapters of useless and unecessary details that even if you skip it, you can still know the plot overall. DON'T PAD THE WORD COUNT BY UNECESSARY DETAILS...

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Daynightdreamer
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thanks..i am working on reducing the details by re-editing the first 50-100 chapters..already at chapter 25 now

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