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BlackSoulWhiteSoul
BlackSoulWhiteSoulLv42yr
2022-10-30 17:34

Very good, Nice characters, Almost no cliches, engaging worldbuilding 👌👍 Its a little bit slowpaced but that Isnt Mich of a problem.

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Shadow_Gamer1
Shadow_Gamer1Lv4

a little bit slowpaced? it takes 50+ chapters to settle a single case,it's the slowest pace iv ever seen,it's p*ss poor writing

DylanTheYappa
DylanTheYappaLv3

literal man child over heresome people like fast pace some people like slow pacesome people like very slow pacejust because the pace is off for youdoesn't mean the writing is badyou stupid ratgo squeak somewhere else

Shadow_Gamer1:a little bit slowpaced? it takes 50+ chapters to settle a single case,it's the slowest pace iv ever seen,it's p*ss poor writing
DylanTheYappa
DylanTheYappaLv3

forgot this sight takes structure out of the comments

DylanTheYappa:literal man child over heresome people like fast pace some people like slow pacesome people like very slow pacejust because the pace is off for youdoesn't mean the writing is badyou stupid ratgo squeak somewhere else
Shadow_Gamer1
Shadow_Gamer1Lv4

you need at least 1k of reading hours to have a opinion,so f**k off noobstar123

DylanTheYappa:literal man child over heresome people like fast pace some people like slow pacesome people like very slow pacejust because the pace is off for youdoesn't mean the writing is badyou stupid ratgo squeak somewhere else
Jacob_0501
Jacob_0501Lv13

Slow paced? More like filled with unnecessary fillers!

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