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SleepyLibrarianLv151yr
2023-04-20 04:31

The storywriting is okay but the author seems to add way too much details. Like, around half of a chapter is mostly just them describing things.

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ImmortalDoggoLv4

what half chapter, you mean over 10 chapters?

Jacob_0501Lv13

Exactly just on the first case alone the author went through almost 20 chapters of unnecessary filler plot that I skipped through because there was little to no point of it. Good story for the most part more because of the concept but there’s so many chapters and details that are not needed. If you took all of it out this story probably wouldn’t have half of it’s chapters.

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