Mc revealed his nanites to 2 random girls he met a few weeks ago and one of them held him to gunpoint just a day before he decided to trust her enough with his deepest secret, his worldchanging nanites. It was a really good story too bad its now ruined by mc running his mouth off like a leaky faucet.
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It’s like he didn’t watch the show where they constantly say NOT to trust anyone lol
It's common sense. If you meet a stranger you don't spill your secrets to them. You don't need to watch the show to know that.
Yet people will use the response of “calm down it’s just a story” or “it’s just fiction it doesn’t matter” to make it seen otherwise 🤦♂️
That's a copout if I ever heard one. The story needs to make sense, doesn't it? Has this person never heard of stranger danger? or thought that "Hey she's waving a gun around and looks like she's used it before. I think she's dangerous."
Well you see .... I already did it in real life lol
Bro hes basically god he can literally create life and that's just with the author semi nerfing them and yet this guy read all the way to Chapter 20 and such to complain and the author gave his reasoning lying just makes the situation much worse.
The normal lapse of logic commonly known as a harem novel.
even worse she talked bad about hit mother, and 1 short sob story later and a glimpse of a photo of his mother and they're all good. would have been fine with only that, but then they do the average harem novel cliches, like doing sexual stuff or teasing before or during something serious. couldn't care less about edge runners anymore so i stopped reading this harem filth.
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