Yo guys this is the author who just noticed that he did not give himself a 5 stars review. I am a newbie author who is trying to get better, so if you have any tips or recommendations don't hesitate and tell me. You can use this review to ask me any question about the fanfic (if you want to ask me respond directly to this review or one of my comment because else I would not get a notification.) Thank you all for reading this and I hope you will enjoy my story.

OK, so I like the overall idea of this fiction but the Execution of it is just really bad. Please take this review with a grain of salt and read it to the end. CHARACTERS: None of the characters (especially the gods that aren't Hade's siblings) were truly introduced, barely even given any character. Just thrown in here and there with what seemed like little thought. The whole war against Kronos was the best time to flush out the character's of Hades, his siblings and the subordinates. To show their strengths and there weaknesses and how they become estranged to each other. There was barely any banter or conversation between most of these gods before you went straight to conflict. DEVELOPMENT: You could have gone into more detail on basic routines Hades and the other gods did to grow stronger. How Hades guided his few subordinates until they came to trust him. Really just explore a bit of what he could do with all of his powers, or least bring it up in passing. STORY: The first volume of this fiction was horribly rushed but is still the best volume of this fiction. Re-written again and not rushed, it could be a good 40- 50 chapter long read worthy of 5 stars alone. The second volume should be trashed all together. It's like a cluster of half finished short stories that don't give any background information and is loosely tied together. FINAL THOUGHTS: Has a lot of potential and should definitely be re-written. I truly hope with at least some of my criticism in mind, I would love to see this fan fic succeed. Thank you for your time.

there's nothing interesting that the othe fics don't have. it's a below average story

This is a very stupid novel, completely random, it is like the author just thinks a dramatic thing to be happening and tries to revolve the plot in this direction but it is horrible, chinese young masters have more quality in them then this, there is not a single fact of human perceived reality that is not twisted in exaggeration in this novel, smiles and nods flying in each paragraph as if they are the only gestures people use, calling this 1D might be generous.

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… very confusing, the premise is interesting, but the story goes at a fast pace where it seems more like a narration, then things happen just like that, for no apparent reason, leading you to a breakdown of perspective that continues to happen, finally , I expected the world to be just Percy Jackson, but when I started adding things at random I lost what little interest I already had, I mean I don't recommend it, but since it has positive comments, I imagine that there are those who like it, anyway… you can give it a try, good luck.

Cringiest fanfiction I ever set my eyes upon, he starts by saying that he's in the Percy Jackson universe which goes nowhere or they forget because he doesn't elaborate on this or mentions it again. Then he adds Naruto characters for some reason and does nothing with them. He goes on to add Minecraft characters to Hades and he renamed Hades(The Realm) to the END. I kid you not the cringiest thing you'll ever read It started off strong and ended up so weak it started to resemble a wet noodle best words I can describe it as.

First of all, what? The fic is very confusing and adding a fast-paced style to it without experience just makes it more confusing, I honestly couldn't follow the story. The characters are honestly bland, not bc they lack personality but bc there isn't any justification as to why they act as they act they just do and that's all To add a cherry on top the grammar isn't great and just adds up to this confusing story

OK. I will be honest. I could not finish the first paragraph. Not because it wasn't good, but simply because it felt like a data dump to me. The writing quality could be a little better (There were a few typos). I gave 3 stars to updates cuz I don't know how often you do. From what I garnered from what I read, the story wasn't progressing. Character design, well, your gods are well described. World background was plentiful (too much if I'm honest) I'm sure the rest is good, but I couldn't bring myself to finish first :( Keep up the good work though :)