great story, fresh take on a character that gets sidelined at best, bashed at worst. as you may gather, the story is about a SI into Neji, and while that sounds like the typical power fantasy, the author pulls it off surprisingly well. instead of the usual going around and being an edgy murderhobo, this time, the main character is constructed in such a way you can really emphatice and understand his motivations and struggles. There isn't enough content to get to the power ups Self inserts usually get, as of the writing of this review, but it was hinted at Neji planning of getting Tenseigan. The way he develops his Byakugan is also well written and explained. one caveat I have in this story, is that author spends way too much vacing about thing we already know. Such as Chunin exams, danzos role in regards to hokage, Genin-Chunin-Jonin meaning, and many other thing. I would understand the need to describe them down to miniscule detail, if author changed those things to be different from canon, but sadly that not so. There's no need to spend third of every second chapter describing the way villages agreed about Chunin exams, because most readers will have prior experience with Naruto canon AND fanon.
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