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Dissapointed_One
Dissapointed_OneLv42yr
2022-10-01 01:05

Not a good book. 5 star reviewers never read anything before this i guess. Most of info on powers are wrong making MC weaker grammar is chinese translation level and the beginning is trash.

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Liam_Neeson
Liam_NeesonLv3

Yeesh man don’t you think your being a little harsh? First off your going to have to tell me what info about the mc’s powers is wrong, I do agree however that he is way too weak for a vasto lorde. And this story is far, FAR from being as bad as a Chinese translation. Also I thought the beginning was good. Not the best but not the worst, it at least wasn’t the standard meeting with god and whatever.

Dissapointed_One
Dissapointed_OneLv4

Liam_Neeson:Yeesh man don’t you think your being a little harsh? First off your going to have to tell me what info about the mc’s powers is wrong, I do agree however that he is way too weak for a vasto lorde. And this story is far, FAR from being as bad as a Chinese translation. Also I thought the beginning was good. Not the best but not the worst, it at least wasn’t the standard meeting with god and whatever.
Sphire1707
Sphire1707Lv14

Try THE DRACONIC PHOENIX OF ABSOLUTE REJECTION(A Bleach fanfic). Also a bleach fan fic and the grammar is a lot better

Dissapointed_One
Dissapointed_OneLv4

Thank you for recomendation.

Sphire1707:Try THE DRACONIC PHOENIX OF ABSOLUTE REJECTION(A Bleach fanfic). Also a bleach fan fic and the grammar is a lot better
Sphire1707
Sphire1707Lv14

You're welcome. i'm actually the writer and i need reviews that will let me know where to better myself

Dissapointed_One:Thank you for recomendation.
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Daoistu7e9tj
Daoistu7e9tjLv4

It was adverb AHAHA

Dissapointed_One:Thank you for recomendation.
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Dissapointed_One
Dissapointed_OneLv4

Here is my opinion bro.

Sphire1707:Try THE DRACONIC PHOENIX OF ABSOLUTE REJECTION(A Bleach fanfic). Also a bleach fan fic and the grammar is a lot better
mow
mowLv4

Heard it was angsty, how was it?

Dissapointed_One:Here is my opinion bro.
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Dissapointed_One
Dissapointed_OneLv4

What is?

mow:Heard it was angsty, how was it?
mow
mowLv4

His novel that he was advertising, thought you read it

Dissapointed_One:What is?
Sphire1707
Sphire1707Lv14

alright, some books just don't hit it right with everybody

Dissapointed_One:Here is my opinion bro.
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Dissapointed_One
Dissapointed_OneLv4

Oh, yeah i left a review. It was worse.

mow:His novel that he was advertising, thought you read it
Dissapointed_One
Dissapointed_OneLv4

Totally the main reason. Your right though.

Sphire1707:alright, some books just don't hit it right with everybody
Sphire1707
Sphire1707Lv14

Welp did what i can. Good luck finding books that suit you

Dissapointed_One:Totally the main reason. Your right though.
The_Essence_
The_Essence_Lv4

Some people are just too much of a menace to society.

Dissapointed_One:Here is my opinion bro.
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Dissapointed_One
Dissapointed_OneLv4

Disrespecting my opinion?

The_Essence_:Some people are just too much of a menace to society.
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qwertypip
qwertypipLv4

they explained pretty clearly that he was weaker because A: He was only fighting demons for months rather than centuries like most Vasto Lordes and is relatively inexperienced and lacks a signature ability to use and B: He's holding back a lot to avoid mass destruction and spirit radiation poisoning people.

Dissapointed_One
Dissapointed_OneLv4

You are totally right.

qwertypip:they explained pretty clearly that he was weaker because A: He was only fighting demons for months rather than centuries like most Vasto Lordes and is relatively inexperienced and lacks a signature ability to use and B: He's holding back a lot to avoid mass destruction and spirit radiation poisoning people.
_Bruh
_BruhLv13

oh boy if max_disappointment is disappointed, then this fic is indeed garbage

Blockshot
BlockshotLv15

I don’t think you’ve read “Chinese level translation” novels if you truly believe they’re the same as this writing

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