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Juliusk
JuliuskLv42yr
2022-10-02 22:14

The grammar is atrocious. Author doesn’t understand the difference between a Vasto Lorde and an Arrancar. Mc doesn’t have a hollow hole, like bruh even Arrancars and Vasto Lordes have it, why did you remove it without an explanation? In conclusion, mc is a human race simp monster main character who right after evolving into a “Vasto Lorde” as authors refers to it, which he is not. He is an Arrancar. Immediately uses garganta to rush to Earth. As soon he arrived at Earth he decides to look for Superman so he could get help getting an object which allow him to walk amongst humans.

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Jamero_7611
Jamero_7611Lv2

save's my time reading this ty

Juliusk
JuliuskLv4

Jamero_7611:save's my time reading this ty
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Kapuchinik
KapuchinikLv5

Thx.

Technical_Mirror
Technical_MirrorLv4

The Mc is a vasto Lorde. don't missunderstand Aizen artificial arrancars as the stage aftes adjuchas they're complete diferente things. natural arrancars are an evolution of vasto Lorde it is proven by the first espada whit is a natural arrancar. the Mc is not a human simp he only wants to be seen and perceived by common people so he can live a somewhat normal life because surprise surprise he was a normal human who sudenly wake up as a hollow in hueco mundo a verte normal reaction after al the slaughter and madness he experienced there. also he waited until he become a vasto Lorde si his garganta so he could be sure it is safe to use and lastly he did not go for Superman help he waited to meet the league to find the mages that work whit them to find a solution to his incapability to be seen

Iceman7422
Iceman7422Lv4

He’s not human though. His soul and body are that of a hollow.

Technical_Mirror:The Mc is a vasto Lorde. don't missunderstand Aizen artificial arrancars as the stage aftes adjuchas they're complete diferente things. natural arrancars are an evolution of vasto Lorde it is proven by the first espada whit is a natural arrancar. the Mc is not a human simp he only wants to be seen and perceived by common people so he can live a somewhat normal life because surprise surprise he was a normal human who sudenly wake up as a hollow in hueco mundo a verte normal reaction after al the slaughter and madness he experienced there. also he waited until he become a vasto Lorde si his garganta so he could be sure it is safe to use and lastly he did not go for Superman help he waited to meet the league to find the mages that work whit them to find a solution to his incapability to be seen
Technical_Mirror
Technical_MirrorLv4

read it again... it clearly says WAS Human

Iceman7422:He’s not human though. His soul and body are that of a hollow.
Sorouko
SoroukoLv14

You have a really high bar for grammar this is prestine for this site

sagepotatoOAA
sagepotatoOAALv4

not now he ain't he a hollow now

Technical_Mirror:read it again... it clearly says WAS Human
Technical_Mirror
Technical_MirrorLv4

? did you even know how to read?

sagepotatoOAA:not now he ain't he a hollow now
sagepotatoOAA
sagepotatoOAALv4

do you not did you u should get grammar before u come back again :/

Technical_Mirror:? did you even know how to read?
Technical_Mirror
Technical_MirrorLv4

thanks for admitting how stupid you are

sagepotatoOAA:do you not did you u should get grammar before u come back again :/
sagepotatoOAA
sagepotatoOAALv4

I meant as a it's this not what u did u stupid

Technical_Mirror:thanks for admitting how stupid you are
jinpeg
jinpegLv14

bro what, there saying he was a human, read carefully

Iceman7422:He’s not human though. His soul and body are that of a hollow.
Iceman7422
Iceman7422Lv4

He’s not a human though. Never in bleach has it been stated that hollows are humans.

jinpeg:bro what, there saying he was a human, read carefully
NagiToad
NagiToadLv4

But he WAS(This is a major keyword) a human before (what I'm assuming since I haven't read it yet) he died and he reincarnated/isekai'd into a hollow Now it doesn't matter if Bleach did/didn't say a hollow used to be a human I'm also pretty sure that it was never mentioned in Bleach that a Hollow was in DC or for that matter different universes

Iceman7422:He’s not a human though. Never in bleach has it been stated that hollows are humans.
Juliusk
JuliuskLv4

Then you clearly have not paid attention. Hollows are born from Human souls who, for various reasons, do not cross over to the Soul Society after their death and stay in the Human World for too long. Orihime’s dead brother literally became one.

Iceman7422:He’s not a human though. Never in bleach has it been stated that hollows are humans.
jinpeg
jinpegLv14

"was"💀

Iceman7422:He’s not a human though. Never in bleach has it been stated that hollows are humans.
SkeleKun
SkeleKunLv4

Thank you. I have no idea what hollow is or whatever, I just thought it'd be a monster mc villain that fights heroes but looks like it's not what I'm looking for. That simp for human as monster is already a huge flag for me to avoid lol.

ElionAVL
ElionAVLLv6

fr man i read the first chapter and couldn't find anything wrong with the grammar, it is readable and that's already very good for a webnovel fanfic

Sorouko:You have a really high bar for grammar this is prestine for this site
Darwin111111
Darwin111111Lv4

The fanfic is very good. I finished everything until this chapter. I don't even remember where the guy mentions that he's an arrancar, because even now, when the heroes they summoned for him fight against the gods, he's still a Vastor lord.

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