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mow
mowLv42yr
2022-10-01 06:09

Disappointing read, its your typical human thats reincarnated into a non human being that wants to go back to being as human as possible and return to society. Ends up joining the Young justice and thats as far as i got. Also it seems like the author doesn't really research much on the stuff he's writing and im talking about how hollows evolve/work. He's just a Vasto Lord but somehow looks human, lost most of his mask when turning into a vasto lord annd the hole in his chest also filled up, even Arrancars which are above Vasto lords in term of evolution line have it but oh well.

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Sphire1707
Sphire1707Lv13

Try THE DRACONIC PHOENIX OF ABSOLUTE REJECTION(A Bleach fanfic). Also a bleach fan fic and the grammar is a lot better

mow
mowLv4

Eh sounds too chinese for my taste.

Sphire1707:Try THE DRACONIC PHOENIX OF ABSOLUTE REJECTION(A Bleach fanfic). Also a bleach fan fic and the grammar is a lot better
Sphire1707
Sphire1707Lv13

It's actually not, just the writer's naming sense is terrible. you could check it out if you want to, promise it's a really good read but your choice

mow:Eh sounds too chinese for my taste.
abcdefghi987654321
abcdefghi987654321Lv3

Dude you are the writer 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

Sphire1707:It's actually not, just the writer's naming sense is terrible. you could check it out if you want to, promise it's a really good read but your choice
Sphire1707
Sphire1707Lv13

Yeah, i need reviews so i'm looking for involved readers in bleach type fanfics to review cuz then it'd be honest and i can learn to write better

abcdefghi987654321:Dude you are the writer 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
mow
mowLv4

I have nothing better to do, so why not

Sphire1707:It's actually not, just the writer's naming sense is terrible. you could check it out if you want to, promise it's a really good read but your choice
mow
mowLv4

I fell for it too

abcdefghi987654321:Dude you are the writer 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
Sphire1707
Sphire1707Lv13

Thanks a million.

mow:I have nothing better to do, so why not
Khalderas
KhalderasLv4

the whole trope of wanting to get back home to normal is so bland and uninteresting, bleh. I mean I get it, logically and in a real situation it would definitely happen this way but this is a fanfic and I'm tired of reading the pleas of some reincarnated bloke that just wants to go home, especially since he isn't in a total dead world. I mean, if he was I worm then yeah...

mow
mowLv4

Not really worth the read, even if you somehow dont mind the things that i mentioned about the MC only having hollow powers while not really being one since the author took away the mask and the hole the story is simply too rushed to be enjoyable in anyway i think it took him a month or two to go from normal hollow to Vasto lord?

Khalderas:the whole trope of wanting to get back home to normal is so bland and uninteresting, bleh. I mean I get it, logically and in a real situation it would definitely happen this way but this is a fanfic and I'm tired of reading the pleas of some reincarnated bloke that just wants to go home, especially since he isn't in a total dead world. I mean, if he was I worm then yeah...
ThePandaCritic
ThePandaCriticLv1

abcdefghi987654321:Dude you are the writer 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
nicholas8293
nicholas8293Lv1

Sphire1707:Thanks a million.
Nandak
NandakLv1

wait, what the actual f***? I didn't knew that 😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂

Sphire1707:It's actually not, just the writer's naming sense is terrible. you could check it out if you want to, promise it's a really good read but your choice
Sphire1707
Sphire1707Lv13

Lol, the name is shorter now

Nandak:wait, what the actual f***? I didn't knew that 😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂
Nandak
NandakLv1

Actually, what I meant was I didn't knew you were the writer.

Sphire1707:Lol, the name is shorter now
Sphire1707
Sphire1707Lv13

oh that, haha. gotta get them views and reviews someway

Nandak:Actually, what I meant was I didn't knew you were the writer.
Axel_Gerard
Axel_GerardLv12

C mieu que les megalomane genocidaire anti human!

Nigga_Lzz
Nigga_LzzLv14

😭😭 I'm definitely going to check it out

Sphire1707:Yeah, i need reviews so i'm looking for involved readers in bleach type fanfics to review cuz then it'd be honest and i can learn to write better
Sphire1707
Sphire1707Lv13

Thank you😁

Nigga_Lzz:😭😭 I'm definitely going to check it out
DeathLingers
DeathLingersLv14

tempting but I think I'm going to just give up looking for new books. these days its harem trash or you get the 'op mc' that struggles and gets slapped around. basically a fake op mc and well I'm sick of it.

Sphire1707:Try THE DRACONIC PHOENIX OF ABSOLUTE REJECTION(A Bleach fanfic). Also a bleach fan fic and the grammar is a lot better
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