Obligatory self review. I dont know if this story is good, to me is golden but I think you should understand by now that I'm not completely normal. What I like and write will need to be tasted by you before you can judge if its good.

I find his obsession with books highly amusing. and I love the way he looks at the world in curiosity without any judgment. I can already picture him training a niffler to steal books. If you ere ever to give him a second pet, please make it a niffler.

I have not the slightest idea how there are only positive reviews here. Yes the writing style is unique, but thats because the MC is written like magic genius rip-off version of a male Luna Lovegood, aswell as being denser than tungsten (osmium levels at time too) and despite being a genius at magic, he is ignorant/apathic to just about everything else... not to forget that at times the ANs take at times up to 25% of the chp lenght. Already wanted to bash my head against a wall at like chp 11 and it got worse with the advancing chps. He also is supposed to be a 22 year old reincarnate... it doesnt show after reincarnation, absolutely not, he just acts like a rip-off Luna, his past memories are nothing worth and if his after reincarnation personality is the same or even only similar to the one he had before reincarnation, then i question how he made it into Uni in the first place. It would have been better to just create a OC in the Harry Potter world rather than this useless reincarnation... good for tags, i guess.

crazy how fast mc got from smart to stupid

One question: Is the MC autistic? I’m seriously questioning whether the MC has a problem. I understand that the MC acts this way to highlight his curiosity and amazement at this new world, but he seems like he is seriously lacking socially. I’m asking because it’s hard to find a normal 30 year old (mentally) that names their diary, along with many other cues.

nothing special... somewhat good base of plot but can be much better story. or much worse small chapter with 1/4 of them being Author notes. Mc has different surname of his parents with no reason.. really no reason he knows who harry potter is but knows little else?! yea..as I said this story could be much better but it has childish writing

Your fanfiction is excellent. The pre-Hogwarts part is really well done. The main character's personality is endearing (definitely not a 2D character). His parents are also well written and the family dynamic is fun. We feel that this world is "alive". The way your OC goes through his childhood and his discovery of magic are also two particularly well thought out points. Scenario-wise, it's a good job. There was a "purpose" behind this prologue. Besides, your writing is just really good. It looks like we have some quality work.

pretty interesting so far...............................................................................................................................

Not bad I guess? 4.8 stars, It's a good story but it feels like there's just something missing, so not a 5 unfortunately. Love the MC's character and i have high hopes for this one, and it's just beginning so maybe it gets 5-worthy later on.