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CopyPaste1
CopyPaste1Lv132yr
2022-09-12 22:37

nothing special... somewhat good base of plot but can be much better story. or much worse small chapter with 1/4 of them being Author notes. Mc has different surname of his parents with no reason.. really no reason he knows who harry potter is but knows little else?! yea..as I said this story could be much better but it has childish writing

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Ganoush
GanoushAuthor

I understand your issues with the novel, especially the short chapters. in the later chapters I have aimed for 1k words per chapter, but the first few are pretty short.

Juliusk
JuliuskLv4

“He knows Harry Potter but little else?” You don’t have to know everything about the series to know the boy who lived. I never was in my life touched a single Harry Potter book and I know who Harry Potter is. Him being less knowledgeable about the series then your average fanfic mc makes things more interesting.

Genn_stars
Genn_starsLv3

not really, the point of someone reincarnated is a certain level of maturity and/or meta-knowledge, both of which, he hasn't, it would've been better to just make an OC.

Juliusk:“He knows Harry Potter but little else?” You don’t have to know everything about the series to know the boy who lived. I never was in my life touched a single Harry Potter book and I know who Harry Potter is. Him being less knowledgeable about the series then your average fanfic mc makes things more interesting.
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THIZZGATOR
THIZZGATORLv4

except hes specifically mentioned to be a book worm and a fantasy one at that.

Juliusk:“He knows Harry Potter but little else?” You don’t have to know everything about the series to know the boy who lived. I never was in my life touched a single Harry Potter book and I know who Harry Potter is. Him being less knowledgeable about the series then your average fanfic mc makes things more interesting.
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