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MapleLv112yr
2022-09-14 02:07

Your fanfiction is excellent. The pre-Hogwarts part is really well done. The main character's personality is endearing (definitely not a 2D character). His parents are also well written and the family dynamic is fun. We feel that this world is "alive". The way your OC goes through his childhood and his discovery of magic are also two particularly well thought out points. Scenario-wise, it's a good job. There was a "purpose" behind this prologue. Besides, your writing is just really good. It looks like we have some quality work.

HP: The Crazy One

Ganoush
4.5
47 Chs

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Ganoush
GanoushAuthor

Im genuinely flattered.

2yr
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Ganoush
GanoushAuthor

Obligatory self review. I dont know if this story is good, to me is golden but I think you should understand by now that I'm not completely normal. What I like and write will need to be tasted by you before you can judge if its good.

2yr

monsterkiek
monsterkiekLv1

I find his obsession with books highly amusing. and I love the way he looks at the world in curiosity without any judgment. I can already picture him training a niffler to steal books. If you ere ever to give him a second pet, please make it a niffler.

2yr
Eins_Mensch
Eins_MenschLv14

I have not the slightest idea how there are only positive reviews here. Yes the writing style is unique, but thats because the MC is written like magic genius rip-off version of a male Luna Lovegood, aswell as being denser than tungsten (osmium levels at time too) and despite being a genius at magic, he is ignorant/apathic to just about everything else... not to forget that at times the ANs take at times up to 25% of the chp lenght. Already wanted to bash my head against a wall at like chp 11 and it got worse with the advancing chps. He also is supposed to be a 22 year old reincarnate... it doesnt show after reincarnation, absolutely not, he just acts like a rip-off Luna, his past memories are nothing worth and if his after reincarnation personality is the same or even only similar to the one he had before reincarnation, then i question how he made it into Uni in the first place. It would have been better to just create a OC in the Harry Potter world rather than this useless reincarnation... good for tags, i guess.

2yr
LazyReaderAlways
LazyReaderAlwaysLv4

I have been starved for a good HP fan fiction. There aren’t that many left anymore. Either the synopsis is horrible or the execution is horrible.(Not really, just mediocre.) But so far I'm really liking this. So I will keep reading this. (probably)

2yr
Fraisier
FraisierLv6

crazy how fast mc got from smart to stupid

2yr
coredisciple
corediscipleLv4

One question: Is the MC autistic? I’m seriously questioning whether the MC has a problem. I understand that the MC acts this way to highlight his curiosity and amazement at this new world, but he seems like he is seriously lacking socially. I’m asking because it’s hard to find a normal 30 year old (mentally) that names their diary, along with many other cues.

2yr
CopyPaste1
CopyPaste1Lv13

nothing special... somewhat good base of plot but can be much better story. or much worse small chapter with 1/4 of them being Author notes. Mc has different surname of his parents with no reason.. really no reason he knows who harry potter is but knows little else?! yea..as I said this story could be much better but it has childish writing

2yr
FAMHDTVPNG
FAMHDTVPNGLv3

pretty interesting so far...............................................................................................................................

2yr
DotComplex
DotComplexLv3

Not bad I guess? 4.8 stars, It's a good story but it feels like there's just something missing, so not a 5 unfortunately. Love the MC's character and i have high hopes for this one, and it's just beginning so maybe it gets 5-worthy later on.

2yr
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