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Morpheus146
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2022-09-12 00:11

Ahem ... The author is here to shamelessly review his own work, nothing to see here, keep scrolling. P.S: You can ask me here some of your curiosities about the story.

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LulzLowKey
LulzLowKeyLv13

Harem?

Morpheus146
Morpheus146Author

That's a sensible question for many readers. Answer ... No. Also, I will answer another question in advance. Who will be the love interest? I don't know, it can be either one lucky young lady OC or one lucky established young lady from the story.

LulzLowKey:Harem?
LulzLowKey
LulzLowKeyLv13

or one lucky shorty who live on top a mountain?

Morpheus146:That's a sensible question for many readers. Answer ... No. Also, I will answer another question in advance. Who will be the love interest? I don't know, it can be either one lucky young lady OC or one lucky established young lady from the story.
Morpheus146
Morpheus146Author

I haven't decided yet, and I also don't want to make it too obvious. You can say Titania is a candidate from a list of many possible young ladies.

LulzLowKey:or one lucky shorty who live on top a mountain?
LulzLowKey
LulzLowKeyLv13

she takes short stake to another level.

Morpheus146:I haven't decided yet, and I also don't want to make it too obvious. You can say Titania is a candidate from a list of many possible young ladies.
BeastMaster64
BeastMaster64Lv1

Morpheus146:That's a sensible question for many readers. Answer ... No. Also, I will answer another question in advance. Who will be the love interest? I don't know, it can be either one lucky young lady OC or one lucky established young lady from the story.
jakobi_fling
jakobi_flingLv14

are you using a specific vlad that is from another anime or show?(this is just a question others might find important I'm partial to Alucard but I'll read regardless)

Morpheus146:I haven't decided yet, and I also don't want to make it too obvious. You can say Titania is a candidate from a list of many possible young ladies.
Morpheus146
Morpheus146Author

He is more of a mix of the historical person (I am an history nerd) and various elements that might indirectly influence me from Hellsing, Castlevania, Untold.

jakobi_fling:are you using a specific vlad that is from another anime or show?(this is just a question others might find important I'm partial to Alucard but I'll read regardless)
CasualDegenerate
CasualDegenerateLv4

Morpheus146:That's a sensible question for many readers. Answer ... No. Also, I will answer another question in advance. Who will be the love interest? I don't know, it can be either one lucky young lady OC or one lucky established young lady from the story.
Ryofu
RyofuLv11

Morpheus146:That's a sensible question for many readers. Answer ... No. Also, I will answer another question in advance. Who will be the love interest? I don't know, it can be either one lucky young lady OC or one lucky established young lady from the story.
Brokedepressed
BrokedepressedLv14

Will Vlad be eating a devil fruit? I think it would be a cool comparison or trick of fate if he ate a Blood Logia/Paramecia or a Mythical Zoan vampire fruit

Morpheus146:He is more of a mix of the historical person (I am an history nerd) and various elements that might indirectly influence me from Hellsing, Castlevania, Untold.
Morpheus146
Morpheus146Author

Indeed, he will eat a devil fruit, something OP and cool at the same time, blood-related ofc to fit with his theme.

Brokedepressed:Will Vlad be eating a devil fruit? I think it would be a cool comparison or trick of fate if he ate a Blood Logia/Paramecia or a Mythical Zoan vampire fruit
Brokedepressed
BrokedepressedLv14

Has he already? Or will it happen in an as of yet unwritten chapter?

Morpheus146:Indeed, he will eat a devil fruit, something OP and cool at the same time, blood-related ofc to fit with his theme.
Morpheus146
Morpheus146Author

Something that will happen in ... an unwritten chapter.

Brokedepressed:Has he already? Or will it happen in an as of yet unwritten chapter?
214dnde
214dndeLv4

Robin but have her be stronger in this

Morpheus146:That's a sensible question for many readers. Answer ... No. Also, I will answer another question in advance. Who will be the love interest? I don't know, it can be either one lucky young lady OC or one lucky established young lady from the story.
Lord_Hastur
Lord_HasturLv5

who my friend ........?

LulzLowKey:or one lucky shorty who live on top a mountain?
Daoistg0M7bG
Daoistg0M7bGLv4

who's that

LulzLowKey:she takes short stake to another level.
KissShot6
KissShot6Lv14

so, i just start read this fanfic, did this involve the main story'?

Morpheus146
Morpheus146Author

The timeline is 1514 so no, at least not yet as far I am concerned.

KissShot6:so, i just start read this fanfic, did this involve the main story'?
TheUltimateP1e
TheUltimateP1eLv4

shouldve made it just "The Impaler" that prince part makes it cringe

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_VIIX_
_VIIX_Lv12

A great piece in the making. So, I got into this after completing the "Blood Unleashed". This might be my personal bias but believe me when I say it Morpheus' works never disappoint, so I've no doubt it'll be a great one just like his previous 2. Now for details: Writing quality: 5/5 Author ain't no newbie. The writing skills have been refined a lot and there are close none of the grammatical mistakes. The style caters to my own personal taste hence you'll get nothing but praise from me. The writing gives me the fairy tale goosebumps as well as it's easy to immerse myself in the world. Story Development: 4.5/5 Now this is only because my personal taste. But the initial MC intro part Wasa bit jarring for my taste. That's why I'm deducting a .5. But other than that the story profession so far has been phenomenal. Character Design: 5/5 I'd say this one is where the author's skills shine through. The characters are so fleshed out that it's easy to imagine yourself in every characters shoes. Now, not many characters have been introduced so far as it's been very little chapters but every single one of them has been interesting nonetheless. World Building: 5/5 Dear author, you have such a gift with your world building. I was impressed with the blood unleashed one and I admit that This one does live upto the hype. It's never boring. The shroud of mystery as it thickens and thins invoke so much tension and so many feelings, that I admire as a reader. Your works make me realise that there are so much more to the world's of my favourite fics than the MCs. Thank you for such a great fic. Overall: 4.75/5 If you haven't read it already then what are you thinking and what even are you waiting for. Just go ahead and immerse yourself in totally different story in a familiar 'one piece' world that we all love and admire. P.S.:- The review has been made when there were only 18 chapter. I'll update this review and score as the time passes.

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