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2023-04-12 03:03

I would give 4.5 stars maybe 5 stars. Beautiful text, hero, narration, new secrets, but there is one pain No: He kills pirates, kills other people, but always protects the main pirate, from whom there should be a reward. This is such stupidity that it's just terrible. They scream at him that they will take revenge, kill his loved ones, find his house and so on, and he just ignores it. Rapists, murderers, extortionists, arsonists, just weak trash will be spared. The first time, I ignored it, but the second time, when he even sewed his leg back on, cured him and stuff? Just disgustingly illogical, as for Vlad Dracula, he never spared his enemies and their families. Ugh. If it will be 3 times, even despite the beautiful text, the magnificent character and the living world, I will give it up and, to be honest, I really don’t want to.

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