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Yeah, I like both Irina and Xenovia (naive, cheerful and bubbly) to (serious, tomboy, stoic-type gal). Tho, is a pain to portray teenage girls, lol
Well, if u want more Blood Magic show, you'll have to let him mock them, taunt them, let them suffer, since if he gets serious, he can one shot them spending most of his Blood Essence to create an Armageddon of Blood Spears and pull a Gilgamesh-style Gate of Babylon on those Vampires. Well... that might be an idea for later.
Vampires are in a way similar to Devils in many aspects. If you base it up to DxD magics they call it Demonic Power. Similarly, in Rosario+Vampire the power system calls it yoki (Demonic Energy which you can word it Demonic Power). That's the explanation, I guess.
I think is a mix of both perceptions. Not disagreeing with your point at least. This part was meant for J to awaken her Sacred Gear, which was hinted from the beginning when Carl-Krassius met her at the bar. I could have written this part multiple ways, but I choose to add the two Heroines (Xenovia and Irina) early in the act so they would 'increase' the danger of the Lasombra Vampires. Take note, that both girls are younger than their start in DxD, and their convincion are still in process of growth. You might say that incidents like this one, were the catalyst of their growth. And for Xenovia it is because in the original cannon she loses to some 'Stray Vampire' and endangered her partner, resulting to her cutting her hair shorter. Well, at least I'm glad you pointed those divergences out. Not really a fan of naive FMLs such as Irina, or similar types of 'Go Happy Go Lucky', and for sure it reflects in my portrayal of her personality early on.
A review would help, but it's up to you if you want to do it now, or to wait for the end of Phase 1 - Tutorial Stage.
They are waiting for Carl-Krassius to show up. It is like fishing. If they engage now and rescue J, he might not show up in front of them, that's the thinking behind this scene.
MC who transmigrated is in charge of a Final Boss Character. The way I thought of it is to be equivalent to Alucard from Rosario + Vampire while for DxD it would be equivalent to a Super Devil (not quite there yet, but we'll get there)
This one made me chuckle a bit.
Haha, yeah man, Krassius is the stagename as a Vampire, Carl/Charles is his first life name.
Noted. Thou, this part of the story is a transition for the starting timeline of DxD/Rosario/Qwaser series. This is where he first makes his mark on the Supernatural World after crushing his Vampire family. This part is where I build the connection with Vatican (Xenovia, Irina, Griselda, Asia, and other figures of the Church) The boring part was the initial build up. Now that we're past this stage with the Vampires finding his location, he'll only have to do a cleansing and make an example of the 'hunters'. This incoming part is also critical in building the self-confidence of the MC, afterall, he inhabits the body of a Monster (Final Boss-type character) Thanks for the feedback, I take note of them, and will not try to drag things. Also, as for Jeanne, for some she might be unnecessary, for others she's okay, however, I have to note that she is an important piece in. With her starts the polygamous relationship, from her, the domino pieces start falling and it wouldn't make it too 'awkward' for the heroines to settle themselves in this Harem situation.
You're asking the wrong person that question (if you asked me). Just give the story a shot, couple a chapters wouldn't hurt you. Then if you like it, good, continue reading. If not, good too, find something to your tastes.
he met Xenovia and Irina (from distance cause he still afraid of conflicts). Well until he finds out how wrong his perception of himself is.
I retconned it, and missed in changing that sole paragraph from Ch.2. The background story that should be followed is that Carl's mother is Carmilla (Queen of Vampires in Austria), while his father is an Magician, thus you have him as a Dhampir. However, there's more to Krassius's story than I'm willing to share. I'm kind of building up to the confrontation with Carmilla and Krassius's family. If I confused you, my apology. I'll make sure to revise that paragraph.