Pretty solid One Piece fanfic right here. The story feels very rushed and I say it as both a good thing and a bad thing. I read several very good One Piece fanfics where MC gathers his crew slowly and the story drags on. And they never get anywhere since at the pace they are going, it would take 500-700 chapters to finish. Meanwhile here, MC is doing the speed run, while also having much important time skips. And so even though there are only 80 chapters out right now, the story already went quite a distance. There is no as much detail put into everything but nonetheless, it's a good story and the next time I look up this bookmark, I can expect to find it finished. A finished One Piece fanfic? I read only two, so i look forward to reading the third. Regardless back to this. We have good MC, lots of good OCs and lots of good fights. The story feels rushed but because of that, it never drags on and feels boring. The beginning is still normal, with author developing his MC and main crew but at some point, he steps on the pedal and it's go go go. Since it's like this just enjoy the rocket speed ride.

Truly, there is not many Fan-Fictions here that are like this one. I could probably name a few in one hand. Firstly, the writing is superb, I couldn't find a single grammatical mistake which made me pause and reread the sentence. Secondly, there is a great amount of OCs, more than I expected, and the way the characters all have a set of personality the author built for them. It is fantastic. Lastly, the story keeps you on edge, I mean it make you excited for the next chapter. Fight after fight, battle after battle, so much things happening it is amazing.

Very good fanfic I've been looking for good fics to be able to read but they've all been very weird but yours has impressed me because it's not like the others who just reincarnated and already had the power of god with them, I like the way you developed to the different characters and how you paid to tell us about each past of the characters, so I congratulate you and continue with the fanfic that is brutal

I have only read couple chapters but unfortunately story is already just totally ridiculous. For one, mc doesn't have name, secondly he just suddenly learnt Tekkai without any actual training or instruction. Athor is applying classic logic of seeing something done in manga or whatnot and somehow that translates to them being able to learn it. Is he going to build iPhone next? :D I mean soru is relatively simple, even though training it is probably really hard without correct methods, but stuff like tekkai would definitely need proper detailed training. If these were so easy to copy, they would already be spread everywhere.

A very one dimensional fast paced boring fanfiction. A one piece fanfiction needs to be more than just sailing from one island to next, having sudden powerups and long narrated fights. It needs elements of kingdom building, information gathering, building alliances, weakening the opponent before the actual fight, betrayals.

without cheat its just plain and boring typical one piece story where mc is another luffy who get crew fight stronger opponent and grow stronger with plot armer... nothing new its same story with decent mc

Pls stop using all caps. It just makes the mc and all other characters look stupid. Ekekjejekekeosbkuusbsukbskjbshkbskhvshkvskhvshksbkhsbkhsbkhsbkhsbhksbhksbhksbkhsbsbkhskbh

It's a Good fanfic. I really hope this one to continue until finished. Good job author. It's a Good fanfic. I really hope this one to continue until finished. Good job author.

A good fanfic, with a mc character suitable for that world he can kill without a doubt if it's his enemies.................................................................................................................................

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