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Ghost_D_writer_Lv122yr
2023-02-27 20:37

without cheat its just plain and boring typical one piece story where mc is another luffy who get crew fight stronger opponent and grow stronger with plot armer... nothing new its same story with decent mc

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Broxhitman1998
Broxhitman1998Lv5

Does it have new opponents? Following canon with stronger Luffy crew just to beat the same characters just easier is boring in the long run but if there are new opponents with new locations I might give it a go. As long the mc has proper character development I am fine with it m.

BlkM5k
BlkM5kLv14

it doesn't and a terrible read

Broxhitman1998:Does it have new opponents? Following canon with stronger Luffy crew just to beat the same characters just easier is boring in the long run but if there are new opponents with new locations I might give it a go. As long the mc has proper character development I am fine with it m.
Miracle_invoker_
Miracle_invoker_Lv3

Did we read the same thing? The mc didn't literally follow any of luffy's locations

BlkM5k:it doesn't and a terrible read
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