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Rhys_Richards_9846
Rhys_Richards_9846Lv142yr
2023-01-31 08:53

Don’t really recommend, bad writing, which seems to be so common

An Ancient Saiyan in Marvel

solibus_orba
3.7
50 Chs

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solibus_orba
solibus_orbaAuthor

you heard him boys don't do the following. Don't read. Don't stone Don't send feet pic i really don't want them.

1yr
47
XAZVAPB0OTH
XAZVAPB0OTHLv4

Eu deveria ter seguido seu Conselho, ;-;

1yr
6BigBoneMeat9
6BigBoneMeat9Lv14

So reverse psychology but only one I don’t get is why feet

solibus_orba:you heard him boys don't do the following. Don't read. Don't stone Don't send feet pic i really don't want them.
1yr
22
Wopeh
WopehLv4

1yr
11
southgamez
southgamezLv15

solibus_orba:you heard him boys don't do the following. Don't read. Don't stone Don't send feet pic i really don't want them.
1yr
Spielmann
SpielmannLv13

ok thanks

solibus_orba:you heard him boys don't do the following. Don't read. Don't stone Don't send feet pic i really don't want them.
1yr
sagepotatoOAA
sagepotatoOAALv4

u getting feet pics? give me em 😂😂

solibus_orba:you heard him boys don't do the following. Don't read. Don't stone Don't send feet pic i really don't want them.
1yr
Vixdraconen
VixdraconenLv14

it's not harem is it??

solibus_orba:you heard him boys don't do the following. Don't read. Don't stone Don't send feet pic i really don't want them.
1yr
Other Reviews
GaZe_Zero
GaZe_ZeroLv2

Some issues are present such as how he gets to places, describing scenery or actions, and stuff like that. There’s also grammar issues, such as punctuation, capitalization, and spelling. It’s an interesting idea but you can go a lot more in depth and it would be better. Also I don’t suggest you having him tell everyone he’s a human but then say my people the Saiyans, it’s a contradiction.

2yr

The_Puffer
The_PufferLv14

Mc to ancient one: "we are powerful race of saiyans and we like to fight. Others would attack you without consent. But Because I am an ancestor to them, I have tons of more urge to fight. But because I was once a human I can controll myself." the conversation basicly went like this but I made it shorter so that it fits here.

1yr
XAZVAPB0OTH
XAZVAPB0OTHLv4

Don’t really recommend. É ruim e o protagonista aje como um humano, mesmo sendo um sayajin, e aliás ele também tem um nome humano, Noah, nome lixo pra um sayajin.

1yr
BlackDragneel
BlackDragneelLv4

Bro,The grammar is so bad it feels like I'm reading a mtl that a machine translated with it's single core,limited vocabulary and limited symbols. You could really use an editor or grammarly.

2yr
Iseeyoudoyouseeme
IseeyoudoyouseemeLv14

If you want my honest opinion it's not that bad me personally I like it. [img=recommend][img=update]

1yr
Saiyan_Of_God
Saiyan_Of_GodLv4

Why is the update so slow I need More, more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more.

1yr
suikofan
suikofanLv3

Is technically readable about don't expect it to make sense. MC seems to be able to guess at anything and everything including the mechanics behind reality. Spends an eternity alone in a void and doesn't change. Is Super Saiyan 4 before he even talks to anyone. Epically strange as he isn't stomping people so why make him OP then nerf him?

1yr
Harem_Seeker
Harem_SeekerLv13

this is a cool story but chapter 3 is a very trash chapter maybe even those of you who read it can just skip it because it really doesn't make sense but overall this novel is really very good u must read it but remember skip chapter 3 oh and 1 more mc is narcisstic that not even hesitate to flaunt his weaknesses

1yr
The_man_The_myth
The_man_The_mythLv4

Not sure why this story gets a lot of bad reviews sure grammar isn’t great but if that mattered to you being on webnovel reading an ff wouldn’t make much sense the story is good and funny at times

1yr
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