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Read books
Signed up to your Patreon and your writing is even worse waste of money tbf
Need to work on your translation and grammer more
Too much of a info dumb on each chapter
Fuck me stop with the “she” so fucking much
Use grammarly
26 chapters and it’s ’ still so boring
Need to go through your work and edit it
This is shit, thought it would get better
Took far to long just to get to this point