Item: An Ancient Saiyan in Marvel
Rating: 2.8
Author: GaZe_Zero

GaZe_ZeroLv22yr

2022-09-28 04:24

Some issues are present such as how he gets to places, describing scenery or actions, and stuff like that. There’s also grammar issues, such as punctuation, capitalization, and spelling. It’s an interesting idea but you can go a lot more in depth and it would be better. Also I don’t suggest you having him tell everyone he’s a human but then say my people the Saiyans, it’s a contradiction.

An Ancient Saiyan in Marvel

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