southgamez

oh oooh ooha oh oooh~

pack!?! isn't he supposed to be a vampire? i'm listening to this story on youtube as an audiobook, and it covers chapters 1-20 and so far no mention of the MC being a vampire, just a weird amnesiac who doesn't talk

well when you grow up living with a witch who eats the children who refuse to stay and have her be their mother, being a trickster who orchestrates unfair deals for power isn't all that bad

"don't mind me..."

i get it, you're all proper road men

kinda lame you wrote a whole different outcome of the previous chapter and stole killua's achievement of taking out all the contestants to be the sole remaining contestant. the only reason killua was allowed to pass was because Netero liked killua and knew making killua continue participating in any further tests was pointless as he would have passed the 1999 hunter exam if not for illumi ruining it by using his nen to control killua

the female version of master roshi

so far, you have made this girl the female lead. you took her to the prom, you met her parents, she had met your sister and your sister gave her the approval. you built character into the relationship, and so much has gone into the relationship that it has caused physical harm to your family. bt you decided to erase all that effort over a petty argument that she clearly explained at the hospital that she was forced by her family to come visit the scumbag, and asked you to show a little respect and not look and act like a psycho by laughing at how badly you injured the scumbag over a broken arm. I will now be dropping this fic, you completely killed it for me. it was good while it lasted

dude you are going to kill your whole fic by trying to add unnecessary drama. why have a whole relationship building arc if you are going to break them up over a scumbag who attacked the MC's brother? if this isn't fixed by the end of the chapter with them getting back together, I'm just gonna drop

if there is any family member that has a muggle in the lineage it's no longer pure, doesn't matter how much time has passed