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ScrambledEggLv39mth
2024-05-22 09:14

Not that bad, but author Nerf Mc and the characters. With the power of all of their chara, they should be the strongest already, not to mention that OP power level isn't that high compared to other Series. Even in the later part Author too lazy to write about the chara that they get and the percentage of their chara. The story is Mc oriented. He fight all of the opponents and author write that fights, but for other SHP author just summarize their fights. So the story kinda boring. Not bad, but not good either. If the power scaling is done right, this ff will be better

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