I wanted to like this one, but the consistency of the plotting is weak and the MC is largely unlikable. Not to say he's completely unlikable, and he certainly has moments of awesome, but his characterization is subject to abrupt 180s whenever the author wants to farce some drama.

It has its own charm compared to the popular novel going around. I enjoy the fact that it's modded Skyrim so MC may not know or remember everything but knows a good amount of stuff like how he exploits his knowledge in the very beginning. I think it's interesting that the MC is also an Orc The dialogue could be better at times, maybe not even that but the formatting, it feels like there are too many blocks of text/paragraphs where as you you'll see frequent line breaks in other popular novels which make it more pleasant to the eyes Events seem to pass fairly quickly, I like that and it's great to get the plot moving though I hope we have slower points in the future. I haven't read extremely far since I like to let things build up but it has been on my mind to keep reading this. I deal very poorly with suspense and when I feel a novel is good, I want to let it build up more before I get. very invested into it. The release schedule is fairly spaced which I don't blame the author for, everyone needs their own inspiration and writes at a different space. I personally cannot imagine writing a novel so I'm not going to be unreasonable but getting to the point of a daily release schedule if possible, would be amazing. Again, I don't know what author has going on in his life and this could just be a minor hobby. I hope this novel overtakes the other Dragonborn one, I think you could really make this into something special that stays at the top of the "all-time" if you keep at it Praise the lemon square

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Very enjoyable so far. It’s difficult to find a good Skyrim ff nowadays. Keep up the good work author 👍🏻.

Bruh it is a modded Skyrim you know it's going to be bloody awesome. also I found this picture which has nothing to do with this story just thought it was funny because of the talks about mods 😂.20/10 would recommend...... now time to go back to..... certain chapters.....😂

to put it in a nutshell...it feels forced. The characters literally look like NPCs with ready-made dialogues, the communicative reactions also have many inconsistencies, I mean, understand that it's a medieval world, but people don't just nod their heads to everything they say to them.

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decent story with good arcs and good writing quality, but it is a pokemon harem, so I don't recommend it if, like me, you don't like pokemon harems

I'm definitely not leaving another review because I want this to get more views thereby encouraging the author to write more, so I can read more...no, this is definitely not my plan. Author should definitely not give up everything he believes in, lock himself in a room and focus solely on this novel, definitely not