Azdal

I think this story is really good, just worried you’re turning Nephis into a bit of a healbot in tough fights. Dont make her some damsel to be saved, Nephis being as tough as she is is a part of why Shadow Slave is so good.

I really enjoy this story, hope you continue it

What exactly do you like about SSG more than SSJ4? Its just base form goku with red hair, and it doesnt fully connect with his saiyan side

If you ever do an alternate version kf this story, essence of the echidna would be amazing in this world.

Author makes interesting settings and characters, sadly has a very unprofessional, childish, and lacksidasical writing style, also makes word count chapters. Stories still have potential the potential to be really good, sadly needs massive upgrade in writing quality.

You seriously wrote “oh, by the way” in your own story as a narration.

You write so childishly, not sure why. Then you make a word count chapter on top of everything else, if you gave the story a more serious adult tone, this fic could be really good. If you dont take your own story seriously, how the hell is anyone else supposed to?

How is hus progress on his sequences? You completely stopped mentioning them…

Hey man, its gonna get confusing really fast if you keep massing up which sequence he’s using. First it was Iron blooded knight, then justiciar, then iron blooded knight again. Is he true god level or what???

Not Justiciar, i think you mean Arbiter. Justiciar is true god level, lol.