Azdal

He’s not a good person, lol. His alignment is already neutral evil.

Millicas’s potential is extremely immense, so when does he start training????

10 hours of reading is crazy

I know you probably have no control over this story, but i believe the path forward is 1 form with limitless potential, not endlessly transforming, even dragonball itself has switched to that dynamic, with the likes of Ultra Ego and Ultra Instinct.

I think this story is really good and has immense potential, but one thing im worried about is the boomerang narrative device. How 1 chapter follows 1 character’s pov/story, next chapter another, so on and so on. I think that form of storytelling is very limited and frustrating. Most people here will care about 1 character more than the others, they wont want to wait 3 more chapters to get back to Goku. I think you either need to make chapters bigger, condense them, or change the narrative device completely.

If it was the original DBZ Goku i’d agree 100%, idk now. I do think its between Death of the Endless and WW

I caught up already, thats depressing. This is a really good story.

This story is actually very impressive, one of the best if not the best OC DC story ive read. You have serious talent, looking forward tk more.

Its so weird knowing the MC is taking care his gf pregnant with another mans kid.

His choice of lovers is extremely weird