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Dissapointed_One
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2023-01-21 06:36

Play Skyrim, you will get better experience. That is all im gonna say. WORD COUNT WORD COUNT WORD COUNT WORD COUNT WORD COUNT WORD COUNT WORD COUNT.[img=faceslap]

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Lemon_Square
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Well, we're all entitled to our own opinions. Is the word count too few or too many? Also, the word count becomes standardized after the first few chapters if that helps. I'm sorry this series isn't for you, but I do agree with playing Skyrim. It's an amazing game that I recommend everyone plays and replays that game.

Dissapointed_One
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Okay guess im gonna correct you. I say play skyrim for better experience becase that is what your ff is. It's just retelling of Skyrim plot with the same dialogs. Literally nothing new is added and by new i don't mean characters if that is not obvious. And you clearly never posted reviews, because WORD COUNT was for actual word count because you can't post the review if there are too few symbols.

Lemon_Square:Well, we're all entitled to our own opinions. Is the word count too few or too many? Also, the word count becomes standardized after the first few chapters if that helps. I'm sorry this series isn't for you, but I do agree with playing Skyrim. It's an amazing game that I recommend everyone plays and replays that game.
sirangle
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Well, actually, there are MAJOR divergences in the story line. And the longer the book goes on, the LESS "quotes" from Skyrim there are. Just be patient. At around chapter 60, the whole book has 0 quotes from the game.

Dissapointed_One:Okay guess im gonna correct you. I say play skyrim for better experience becase that is what your ff is. It's just retelling of Skyrim plot with the same dialogs. Literally nothing new is added and by new i don't mean characters if that is not obvious. And you clearly never posted reviews, because WORD COUNT was for actual word count because you can't post the review if there are too few symbols.
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ShamelessGengar
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It has its own charm compared to the popular novel going around. I enjoy the fact that it's modded Skyrim so MC may not know or remember everything but knows a good amount of stuff like how he exploits his knowledge in the very beginning. I think it's interesting that the MC is also an Orc The dialogue could be better at times, maybe not even that but the formatting, it feels like there are too many blocks of text/paragraphs where as you you'll see frequent line breaks in other popular novels which make it more pleasant to the eyes Events seem to pass fairly quickly, I like that and it's great to get the plot moving though I hope we have slower points in the future. I haven't read extremely far since I like to let things build up but it has been on my mind to keep reading this. I deal very poorly with suspense and when I feel a novel is good, I want to let it build up more before I get. very invested into it. The release schedule is fairly spaced which I don't blame the author for, everyone needs their own inspiration and writes at a different space. I personally cannot imagine writing a novel so I'm not going to be unreasonable but getting to the point of a daily release schedule if possible, would be amazing. Again, I don't know what author has going on in his life and this could just be a minor hobby. I hope this novel overtakes the other Dragonborn one, I think you could really make this into something special that stays at the top of the "all-time" if you keep at it Praise the lemon square

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