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2022-06-25 03:14

I like it though I believe you should really have the MC use more of his knowledge of the game Undertale as if he doesn't use it why should he be a reincarnator

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Thank you for the review. It will definitely become more relevant when he has access to more of the underground. I just wanted to avoid him somehow having memorized the entire script of the game or how all the attacks work.

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