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Tempest20773mthReplied to Lazy_Fox111Tywin was having arguments and disagreements with the Mad King, who used to be his friend. The King was paranoid about him, taking more power so Tywin wanted to get out of the capital and not burned to death for some perceived slight. Tywin's Heir returning to their ancestral hold to help govern his lands served as a good excuse to leave the capital and not have it be perceived as a slight against the king.
It was such a poor time that the old lion had been forced to plead illness and resign as Hand of the King to return to his seat at the Rock. Not that he hadn't been fishing for a reason to bow out of the position ever since his once friend had gone mad. Still, with Kevan gone, the leadership of the Rock fell to the recently returned heir.- Tempest20773mthReplied to Lazy_Fox111
Maaaybeee... But can anyone prove it ;)
While waiting for the Maester, I let Gerion arrange a rider to contact Kevan. I took the chance to examine the body and used the knowledge I gained from forging a silver link to try and determine a cause of death. Well, that's what it looked like. In reality, I already knew that it would look like he died of a heart attack. What I was truly looking for was any sign that might point to the truth. - Tempest20773mthReplied to Anonny_Anonymous
Thanks for the comment. It's not a complete ban on technological development. It just won't be a huge aspect of this story. Some things might be possible, but I don't even know how to make paper right now, much less after 15 years in another world. The crop stuff might be implemented but only after a while of research by people other than Jaime. He might remember only the vaguest stuff about crop rotation and that's being generous.
Ch 1 We Will Watch Your Career with Great Interest - Tempest20773mthReplied to Saleh_AL_ameriCh 1 We Will Watch Your Career with Great Interest
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Unfortunately, no, I've tried
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Ah! A wild system appears.
[System Awakening... Error.... Re-updating the System...] - Tempest20773mthCommented
school antagonist spotted?
"But from what Garvin said, that baby is bound to die before the age of 15. When that happens, Athena will realise the truth after going through hardships and come back more broken. At that time, she will be easily to be controlled. With her potential in swordsmanship, she might become the fourth Legendary Walker of Empire in the future, turning into a best guard dog for our sons. On the other hand, I have an excellent candidate for the wizard Allen's apprentice job. I know you want to give that child a better future; but she had already decided her path. Let's give that chance to our grandson. Also, he actually has a 'High' rank affinity in Water Element and could be considered as genius in the whole Empire like Athena. The only negative is that he is overly arrogant due to Daniel's pampering and didn't have any extra affinity. But as long as we send him to become the disciple of any Academic Professors, there is a high chance for him to become a powerful Wizard." - Tempest20773mthCommented
Get hit with that british royal family demotion. Don't worry we'll let you keep your fancy hat.
'At that time, this Royal Family will be nothing more than a glorious family of the past. We might not even be able to protect ourselves.' - Tempest20773mthReplied to God_of_energyCh 21 JUSTICE
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The quality of the writing is very good with few if any mistakes while also being easy to follow. The story is just getting started but is driven by its characters and promises to be an exciting journey to witness. I've got a very good idea about how the world and characters look in my head, and that's what makes this a five star for me.
- Tempest20773mthReplied to Kevin_Martin_4147Ch 20 Frisk Character Sheet (Updated) + Schedule
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:)
Aloha, wonderful readers. This is a message to the 4 people who probably still care about this story. I've been getting really back into writing recently and wanted to continue one of my old stories. I've always had this one planned out pretty far, and I think it's my favorite complete story I could tell if I do it right. So, I'm going to try and continue it. - Tempest20773mthPosted
Very cool story. It might be a bit early to definitively rank everything, but I certainly like where it is going. The quality is fantastic, and I can really feel the world at work around the characters. I just have some recommendations from a fellow author. 1. Synopsis! It's actually one of the most important aspects of a novel. I'd heavily recommended adding one. 2. Your update speed isn't bad but webnovel usually prefers more chapters that are a bit smaller. You definitely don't have to, this is just some advice, but maybe break up some of the longer chaps into shorter ones.
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It's a very interesting story. You're immediately thrown into the world and all its mysteries. Some might think that it's too early, but I love hints to the greater world and conflict. The characters are interesting and make you invested in them not suffering (even if they will). Though I will say from the perspective of someone who doesn't use as many commas as I should, it might do to break up a few of the longer sentences. I can't wait to see more!
This book has been deleted. - Tempest20773mthReplied to Destroyer3000Ch 19 Explained
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