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Booklovingwriter
BooklovingwriterLv42yr
2022-06-23 10:26

I really love the fic so far and I hope the author never drops. .........................................................................

I Am Frisk: An Undertale/Worm CYOA Story

Tempest2077
4.6
26 Chs

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Sorrias
SorriasLv5

I have to say your history is incredible, with good character progression, amazing interactions, and fight scenes too, above all that you have good grammar, I simply love it.

2yr

_Tea_Lover_
_Tea_Lover_Lv15

One of my favorite Undertale novels I've seen so far, keep up the great work.

1yr
Tempest2077
Tempest2077Author

Hello this is the shameless author review that I am rewarding myself with for getting to 15K+ words. But I will also try and give a pretty fair review of my work. Writing quality would probably be around 3 star normally, but I have multiple grammar checkers and I also think I have been improving lately. I've even started to enjoy reading my own work (and I have pretty high standards) Stability of updates is a full 5 stars. It's the summer after my senior year of High school and I have ran out of things to read. So these updates should be pretty steady for at least a couple more months. Higher for the initial week and should stable out at like 3, 4, or 5 per week depending on work. Story development is a 5. Why would I write some story I didn't think was a 5? This story has pretty much evolved over the course of months in my head and days writing summaries before it came to the novel world. Character Design... its Undertale enough said. Just kidding I could probably use some work describing characters so a 4 works. Also just Undertale. Later on the world will expand with more of my original ideas but for now we are in Undertale.

2yr
DJSANS_321
DJSANS_321Lv14

I hope you post more of this it hard to find a good undertale oc fanfic

10mth
XolotL_Rudon
XolotL_RudonLv1

In all honesty this book is very good for me and hilarious, your doing good from my point of view and hope you will continue this book but if you have already dropped it that's still fine. Hope to see more of your work regarding one of my favorite video games, and for this is why i gave you my stone, keep up the good work

1yr
lutov
lutovLv1

I need more chapter !!!! More !!! MoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMore

2yr
Rezas_0398
Rezas_0398Lv1

I found this on fanfic.net and searched for it so I could actually keep up to date with it, I'm really enjoying the story so far! I eagerly await further updates =3

1yr
Fogotorio
FogotorioLv1

Liked It Very much, i Hope the autor continues, haver ALL my suporte๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ

2yr
Roon_Toon1
Roon_Toon1Lv14

I like it though I believe you should really have the MC use more of his knowledge of the game Undertale as if he doesn't use it why should he be a reincarnator

2yr
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