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XolotL_RudonLv11yr
2023-11-09 12:29

In all honesty this book is very good for me and hilarious, your doing good from my point of view and hope you will continue this book but if you have already dropped it that's still fine. Hope to see more of your work regarding one of my favorite video games, and for this is why i gave you my stone, keep up the good work

I Am Frisk: An Undertale/Worm CYOA Story

Tempest2077
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Tempest2077Author

Thanks for the review! It actually played a part in why I'm starting up this story again.

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SorriasLv5

I have to say your history is incredible, with good character progression, amazing interactions, and fight scenes too, above all that you have good grammar, I simply love it.

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_Tea_Lover_Lv15

One of my favorite Undertale novels I've seen so far, keep up the great work.

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BooklovingwriterLv4

I really love the fic so far and I hope the author never drops. .........................................................................

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Tempest2077Author

Hello this is the shameless author review that I am rewarding myself with for getting to 15K+ words. But I will also try and give a pretty fair review of my work. Writing quality would probably be around 3 star normally, but I have multiple grammar checkers and I also think I have been improving lately. I've even started to enjoy reading my own work (and I have pretty high standards) Stability of updates is a full 5 stars. It's the summer after my senior year of High school and I have ran out of things to read. So these updates should be pretty steady for at least a couple more months. Higher for the initial week and should stable out at like 3, 4, or 5 per week depending on work. Story development is a 5. Why would I write some story I didn't think was a 5? This story has pretty much evolved over the course of months in my head and days writing summaries before it came to the novel world. Character Design... its Undertale enough said. Just kidding I could probably use some work describing characters so a 4 works. Also just Undertale. Later on the world will expand with more of my original ideas but for now we are in Undertale.

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DJSANS_321Lv14

I hope you post more of this it hard to find a good undertale oc fanfic

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lutovLv1

I need more chapter !!!! More !!! MoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMore

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Rezas_0398Lv1

I found this on fanfic.net and searched for it so I could actually keep up to date with it, I'm really enjoying the story so far! I eagerly await further updates =3

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FogotorioLv1

Liked It Very much, i Hope the autor continues, haver ALL my suporte👍👍👍👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌

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Roon_Toon1Lv14

I like it though I believe you should really have the MC use more of his knowledge of the game Undertale as if he doesn't use it why should he be a reincarnator

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