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XerzxesLv131yr
2023-05-25 11:34

Nah no way Alan the mc is powerful to some exten but is a pushover and no villain worthy demeanor the title should be change as it’s misleading the novel even resemble of any type of villain he’s just your typical average cliche protagonist in those wuxia cultivation world novels that relies on plot armor. This novel says romance also? Wow Elijah the suppose protagonist of the novel he reincarnated to got more romance development in 4 chapters than Alan’s romance development in the whole 150 chapters I read in fact there wasn’t even a single relation ship development with the female lead in those chapters what is a disappointment

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LoveVillainLv11

i agree with this review. i was expecting also the romance development read about chapter 111. its too darn slow. too many other character filler stories i got bored and drop the whole.

SAINT_of_ORIGINLv14

lol bro I just looked at the title of siscon in the character sheet for mc and thought of dropping this l but you just cemented my decision like what kind of retard forms real bonds when being pursued by godlike entities

CrownClown666Lv4

I'm looking for 2 types of Villain MC- Villain #1: *Calm and Cold *Rarely shows any alarm or distress *Often has entire situations planned out well in advance *Dangerously manipulative *Controls his forces (if any) through Respect, Intimidation, Fear, and Mind Games. Villain #2: *Anarchist *Homicidal *Hostile *Unhinged *Embodies and intensifies the philosophy of anarchy. *Hyper focused on the destruction of a civil society. If either one these is what this novel is like, then I would like to know. If you know of any other novels that might come close to either of those descriptions, a recommendation would be welcomed as well. It would be greatly appreciated. Thank you.

yphineasLv2

I AM THE GAME'S VILLAIN NO MORE PAIN FOR THIS VILLAIN

CrownClown666:I'm looking for 2 types of Villain MC- Villain #1: *Calm and Cold *Rarely shows any alarm or distress *Often has entire situations planned out well in advance *Dangerously manipulative *Controls his forces (if any) through Respect, Intimidation, Fear, and Mind Games. Villain #2: *Anarchist *Homicidal *Hostile *Unhinged *Embodies and intensifies the philosophy of anarchy. *Hyper focused on the destruction of a civil society. If either one these is what this novel is like, then I would like to know. If you know of any other novels that might come close to either of those descriptions, a recommendation would be welcomed as well. It would be greatly appreciated. Thank you.
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_ZxeonLv3

if you say he’s a pushover then i call you a joke, alan has legit no reason to fight most of the people he’s being challenged by and as he wants to get stronger he had a part of his soul (soul crystal) taken from him, then he had extistenial life identity crisis’s and then he has more and more seeing the pain and suffering he will inflict, being taken over, having no help, being just a soul that gained sentience because in the beginning he was supposed to be a puppet for the real “james” yet he has no character development and no romantic intreast (which is a lie as in one of the chapters it was pointed out that he has been having feelings for his contracter (body gaurd) but he didnt go on due to him being uneasy about it and it further deepen’s when he finds out he was just a soul that was made to be a puppet not to gain sentience or anything

XerzxesLv13

You are prolly one of those with masochistic tendencies huh?

_Zxeon:if you say he’s a pushover then i call you a joke, alan has legit no reason to fight most of the people he’s being challenged by and as he wants to get stronger he had a part of his soul (soul crystal) taken from him, then he had extistenial life identity crisis’s and then he has more and more seeing the pain and suffering he will inflict, being taken over, having no help, being just a soul that gained sentience because in the beginning he was supposed to be a puppet for the real “james” yet he has no character development and no romantic intreast (which is a lie as in one of the chapters it was pointed out that he has been having feelings for his contracter (body gaurd) but he didnt go on due to him being uneasy about it and it further deepen’s when he finds out he was just a soul that was made to be a puppet not to gain sentience or anything
Mayank_Kumar_9274Lv13

CONQUERER'S PATH while isn't really villian but he does what a should do and is super manipulative

CrownClown666:I'm looking for 2 types of Villain MC- Villain #1: *Calm and Cold *Rarely shows any alarm or distress *Often has entire situations planned out well in advance *Dangerously manipulative *Controls his forces (if any) through Respect, Intimidation, Fear, and Mind Games. Villain #2: *Anarchist *Homicidal *Hostile *Unhinged *Embodies and intensifies the philosophy of anarchy. *Hyper focused on the destruction of a civil society. If either one these is what this novel is like, then I would like to know. If you know of any other novels that might come close to either of those descriptions, a recommendation would be welcomed as well. It would be greatly appreciated. Thank you.
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Asad_ChaudaryLv3

dude try "I became the novel biggest antagonist"

CrownClown666:I'm looking for 2 types of Villain MC- Villain #1: *Calm and Cold *Rarely shows any alarm or distress *Often has entire situations planned out well in advance *Dangerously manipulative *Controls his forces (if any) through Respect, Intimidation, Fear, and Mind Games. Villain #2: *Anarchist *Homicidal *Hostile *Unhinged *Embodies and intensifies the philosophy of anarchy. *Hyper focused on the destruction of a civil society. If either one these is what this novel is like, then I would like to know. If you know of any other novels that might come close to either of those descriptions, a recommendation would be welcomed as well. It would be greatly appreciated. Thank you.
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ThefantastictouchLv4

I write this review after reading 268chapters.At first, I thought this book would have a great future. But as we started nearing this future, I was left disappointed .First,here are the pros : - The author is devoted and constantly improving his writing skills.- The updates are quite regulars .- There's little to no info dumps, and everything is slowly introduced and explained.- The plot isintriguing .- The pace is nor quick nor slow.-There's some comedy.Then, the cons :- The characters are too shallow.There are so many chapters, yet it feels like we don't know enough about the characters. First, the MC. Alan is honestly sooooo annoying.Each time an important thing happens to him, it feels like he will grow as a person. However it's only that. A "feeling" . He is still that mentally weak person whom everyone brags about the potential but that we don't see acting as he should when the situation is dire. The case Ezra Fornum; thefight with the orc( if I remember correctly),were all occasions for him to grow more powerful; both physically and mentally. Yet, it didn't happen.Plus , he is always complainingabout his weakness, which makes hisinexistent progress even more annoying.Also , the mc isn't even a villain until now.(Ps: He is also not smart nor stupid, which some might not like.)Second , the fl . Sabrina's relationship with the Mc is so suprlerficial. Yet the author TELLS us that "they're SO in love! They just do not want to be together for now."Apart from the shallowness of theirrelationship, Sabrina herself feels 2D. Sure,we know about her background. But the fact is that we don't really know her aside from this. What is her goal in life ? What does she like ?What are her pet-peeves?lt feels likeshe's not really a person.And this appliesto every other characters of the book. - The author gave a too powerful cheat to the Mc.The ice dragon breathing technique ( if I remember well) made him go from E rank to C- rank at the first try . So if the technique is so powerful and the Mc wants to be strong, isn't using it( descretly) enough for him to attain his objectives ?There have been so many traumatizing events that him not using the technique sooner doesn't make sense.Moreover , recently( chapter 260 or ), he used it again and only got up to C- rank; which makes it SO obvious that the author is attempting to nerf the Mc. - The feelings are clumsily expressed .I honestly feel so tired of reading paragraphs of Alan rambling about his pain and burden. But if they are not exagerated, the emotions aren't palpable.This all mostly stems from the lackof description of the thing that provokesthese emotions and its possible impactson the Mc or his loved ones.For example, If a character is afraid of something, you can describe the thing accordingly from his/ her perspective . But describing it is not enough.One should also show the impacts of the said thing so the reader, too, genuinely feels how imperative it is for the Mc to win against it.-Last but not least , what are the Mc's goals?It is understandable that Alan is perturbed by the fact that he is only a sort of 'fake Alan Peccator '. However , his confusion shouldn't be stretched out for 100 chapters as it hasbeen the case since now.It seems that rather than thinking pragmatically , the Mc is evolving in his world and waiting for answers, which will not come if he stays as static as he is . All in all, this bookfailed my expectations. Nonetheless, I wish all the best to the author and pray for his improvement .

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