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will ranran ever break up with him?? or no

sorry for bad english

its a good novel, but i just have one problem with it, its the first 10 rankings. dialga palkia and giratina are always going to be top 3, while this does change none of them are overwhelmingly stronger then the other. Mewtwo is no way close to being even close to strength as giratina, palkia, or dialga, because dialga maintains time throughout the entire universe, not just the pokemon earth, same with giratina, and palkia. because they dont nescessarily reside in subspaces, its a literal entirely different dimension, i can understand you wanted to keep it a but grounded, but overall the pokemon world’s high tiers are insanely comparable to the dragon balls. as its highly implied arceus created the entire pokemon multiverse, considering in sun and moon, the ultra sun its stated that the ultra wormholes lead to entirely new dimensions across (possibly) different universes, and arceus didnt create the universe when he was born like a big bang, he made it with a 1000 hands. Also you mischaracterized necrozma, it was never a god of light in the sense you are protraying it. While yes he is a being of endless light who illuminated entire worlds with it. While powering entire worlds with his light, his main one he was powering got greedy, and wanted its light, so they tried extracting its light which damaged it, and lead to it going after lunala and sogaleo, who had the exact light to give back its true form. Also lunala and sogaleo arent really the god of day and night, they’re more like representitives… if that makes sense

probably because those immortals are too busy scheming or cultivating idk

you did read the part where he said without the use of writing aids right? no hate and no shade but this chapter is prolly him raw dogging it

“a dream… i saw a dream” head ahh

self cucking

Shameless author here, im a new writer, new to all of this writing stuff, so if you want to help and give me some pointers, please go ahead!

if you say he’s a pushover then i call you a joke, alan has legit no reason to fight most of the people he’s being challenged by and as he wants to get stronger he had a part of his soul (soul crystal) taken from him, then he had extistenial life identity crisis’s and then he has more and more seeing the pain and suffering he will inflict, being taken over, having no help, being just a soul that gained sentience because in the beginning he was supposed to be a puppet for the real “james” yet he has no character development and no romantic intreast (which is a lie as in one of the chapters it was pointed out that he has been having feelings for his contracter (body gaurd) but he didnt go on due to him being uneasy about it and it further deepen’s when he finds out he was just a soul that was made to be a puppet not to gain sentience or anything