i know there arent any chapters to rate on, but based on your other fanfic, you are certainly a great writer. amazing is all i can say about your writing. make sure not to make too many fanfics that it takes too much of your time. I've seen writers make too many fanfic and they lose motivation due to the constant need to divide attention

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Updated review: No clear storyline/narrative just world hoping and creating new logic for each world. Characters have halted all progression because the author has already made a 'set in stone' path, which I will add has yet to even begin it's introductory stage. Writing is still good in terms of literacy quality. World's background has been completely destroyed with the introduction of Type-Moon/Nasuverse crossover. In short summary, read without brain usage and you should be good.

I'm addicted to Yuri and I can't stop it

Do you want a story about a Raven from RWBY that remembers her past life? And it was not a very good life? How about some Yuri with characters? Power growth? You're in the right place~.

Yeah so not enough people be ratin'! I wanna get this out there so here's a shameless 5 star review for my fic.

I'm genuinely enjoying this fan-fiction and it would be a shame if you were to drop this so please keep up the excellent work. so anyone reading this review I think you will enjoy this book if you're not already reading the book.

the novel is quite good and one should read a novel by themselves then reading a review sure a review helps but who knows weather u like the novel or not so just try the novel there is little to no grammatical errors but the one bad thing about this novel is update stabilty as for reast i have no probs

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