Item: A new Rasa in Naruto world
Rating: 5
Author: michael_copeland

michael_copelandLv152yr

2022-05-30 02:40

great story so far! I love how you are diving in to his kekkai genkai. maybe he could learn some fuinjutsu as well, it goes incredibly well with magnet release. there are things like curse seals you could apply to weapons to keep enemy's bleeding or paralysing them, storage seals for more metal or chakra sealing for imprisoning shinobi after surrounding them with metal like iron sand or gold dust.

A new Rasa in Naruto world

Shadow7Blue

4.2

42 Chs

Liked by 44 people

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Shadow7BlueAuthor

Thanks friend. And the truth is that it is an incredible idea. So sorry if I stole it lol.

2yr

TheRamenLordLv13

you aren't stealing anything hehe you are just being inspired by him 😉 But if you want you can mention his name in the author's note thanking him for the idea. Also i read the synopsis, i am really excited to read your work. I already feel like its gonna be awesome.

Shadow7Blue:Thanks friend. And the truth is that it is an incredible idea. So sorry if I stole it lol.

2yr

DesertstormLv3

Now that he's learning more about his kekkai genkai does this mean he'll put less effort into his wind, earth, and water jutsu mastery?

Shadow7Blue:Thanks friend. And the truth is that it is an incredible idea. So sorry if I stole it lol.

2yr

michael_copelandLv15

Go for it! lol

Shadow7Blue:Thanks friend. And the truth is that it is an incredible idea. So sorry if I stole it lol.

2yr

BreezyNovelsLv5

So He is not only going to become stronger right? He is also going to become the Kazekage and improve his village right?

Shadow7Blue:Thanks friend. And the truth is that it is an incredible idea. So sorry if I stole it lol.

2yr

DarkestCallingLv14

I will point out you can basically give him knockoff / better / worse then uzumaki adamantine sealing chains only reason i mentioned better is with enough metal he can shape seals all over the environment being something like a domain vs how sealing chains are chains worse because if I remember correctly sealing chains have special properties and also can form seals easily and can have domain affect with seals vs the way I said which would probably require ridiculous levels of control and sealing knowledge heck rasa even has red hair maybe make him an off shoot having uzumaki blood in some ancestor

Shadow7Blue:Thanks friend. And the truth is that it is an incredible idea. So sorry if I stole it lol.

2yr

Iyoten_kita_janLv2

Make him like the villain in big hero 6

Shadow7Blue:Thanks friend. And the truth is that it is an incredible idea. So sorry if I stole it lol.

2yr

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