michael_copeland

Nice! I was thinking Spectator or Bard, won a bet with a friend who thought Hunter! Thx Author and Editor!

nah

Thanks for the chapter!

Yeah, it’s off putting that the guy exhausted himself and then woke up with a slave mark.

Don’t like the fact that the me has been forced into servitude. I don’t think this is the direction that the story should go.

Same

Nope, great pacing

+1

Maybe take ideas from other fiction, but have him be a mage build that focuses around using knowledge to manipulate reality?

+1