This story is about the struggle of a woman, Struggling with her body image Prioritizing her children's wellbeing over her own, and judged by society for things she couldn't control. It's a mellow read, but I guarantee a satisfying read and rewarding ending. Thank you for reading, and please support this story [img=recommend]

We really need these kinds of stories to show that women have to stand up against the unjust. Women in various countries go through this. I thank the author for writing this story. And basically the writing is very good. Vivid. So go ahead and read this book guys, you won't be disappointed...

I know Pupa will never disappoint his readers and again, I'm really pleasured to recommend his novel knowing that there would be a great plot, moving characters, and great story flow. And wow, I am amazed by your progress. The first few chapters are already great. Chloe is a stunning mother with a cute and adorable daughter Mackie as her sidekick! I am definitely looking forward to read more from you and from Chloe's story with her daughter and love interest, Vernon. I'm wishing you the best and hope you win! --Poisonlily

The book starts off really strong, giving you a glimpse of a woman in unideal circumstance that causes her to have trust issues in people. This captures your attention and you want to learn more about the woman and hoping she finds her voice. But after a while the author starts repeating things over and over almost as a filler to fill up a chapter. It takes 20 chapters to get to the next scene only to talk about the same thing over and over. It’s quite annoying and a money grab. I can no longer support this type of writing or the author.

I liked the story a lot when I started to read, but after chapter 70 or so, the story development is not very prominent, where some of the chapters have half of the context from what has been previously mentioned in the earlier chapters. I liked the characters and where the story is going, but there has been too many hints on potential developments without any explanations further in the story, which makes you feel like the author is just teasing the readers. Perhaps it is the style of writing, to bring out more than 500 chapters, but that is too slow and repetitive too my liking to thoroughly enjoy the story and the characters.

So far, 350 chapters with almost no story progression, stupid characters, ridiculous world views, and incongruous story development. I think the author needs to focus on the romance scenes because that's what he or she is good at.

Does this ever get better? The summary made it seem like it wouldn’t be her getting beat down constantly, that she would rise up. Nope just misunderstandings and torturing Chloe. If I were her I’d have ended myself long ago. It’s written well but I think I have to drop it. I don’t want to keep paying to read about a woman being abused by everyone in her life.

Im following and reading till now ( latest chapter ) Interesting story but too dragging and slow development keep repeating same plot from chapter to chapter.But I still want to how the ending.

I am reading this book, but don't love it. I think I could very easily LOVE this story, but with very heavy editing and some rewriting! There are a lot of mistakes in the writing, the flow doesn't work the best, characters are immature and unrealistic, and it drags out every little detail. I have skipped around a hundred chapters so far, and could have very easily skipped a lot more. The best writing is definitely from Chloes perspective or Chloe and Vernon's interactions. Anything from Pracilla's perspective could be completely skipped, most to all from Vincent's perspective could be skipped, or seriously condensed. There is a LOT of repeating the same exact thing over and over in different wording, sometimes like 3 whole chapters. It feels like the story is JUST FINALLY STARTING to develop and it is like 450 chapters in. It should have been to this point and character development MUCH earlier. I have dropped this book several times, then started back on the current chapter when I didn't have anything else I was currently reading, without feeling like I missed anything. Hope that Chloe will finally get a happy ending keeps having me come back, but ready to just skip straight to that ending.

The story and characters in themselves are very good. But the book drags quite a bit. We’re at 350 chapters now and there is finally a glimpse of some character and story development. I feel that it could have been edited down by more than half of what has been written. I will continue reading because the story is unique and I definitely want to see what happens.