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2022-08-12 06:26

I liked the story a lot when I started to read, but after chapter 70 or so, the story development is not very prominent, where some of the chapters have half of the context from what has been previously mentioned in the earlier chapters. I liked the characters and where the story is going, but there has been too many hints on potential developments without any explanations further in the story, which makes you feel like the author is just teasing the readers. Perhaps it is the style of writing, to bring out more than 500 chapters, but that is too slow and repetitive too my liking to thoroughly enjoy the story and the characters.

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yeah a lot of these stories do that, drives me crazy too, which is why when the story is worth it and I get around that section I just read the titles and the little beginning paragraph until I get to a part where it seems like something important is finally happening, check what is going on, then when it gets repetitive again, skip again. For example in a 1000 chapter book that almost always get in to these stupid repetative loops, from ch 120 or so, till around 750 I will usually have only read about 150-300 chapters. but this one got so good later on that I ended up going back and reading almost all of them

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