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AnAxeToGrind
AnAxeToGrindLv52yr
2022-05-28 09:22

As long as you don't use your brain or look at the numbers he uses then it can be an alright novel... ,.......................................

Dragon ball Z: A True Saiyan

Ozonelayer
4.1
169 Chs

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Ozonelayer
OzonelayerAuthor

What do you mean??

2yr
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AnAxeToGrind
AnAxeToGrindLv5

Born on 100x gravity planet and trains in 400x gravity....still has 100k power level at 5 years makes no sense in the universe you are in

Ozonelayer:What do you mean??
2yr
88
Ozonelayer
OzonelayerAuthor

I guess that’s fair.👍🏾

AnAxeToGrind:Born on 100x gravity planet and trains in 400x gravity....still has 100k power level at 5 years makes no sense in the universe you are in
2yr
21
Hot_Orenge
Hot_OrengeLv13

like how you took the criticism man, keep up the goodwork

Ozonelayer:I guess that’s fair.👍🏾
2yr
27
VXZD_ZD
VXZD_ZDLv4

not to mention that the MC's power levels don't make sense he should have been born much stronger and he's very nerfed like a weakened Broly

Ozonelayer:I guess that’s fair.👍🏾
2yr
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VXZD_ZD
VXZD_ZDLv4

even though he should be multiple times stronger than Broly

VXZD_ZD:not to mention that the MC's power levels don't make sense he should have been born much stronger and he's very nerfed like a weakened Broly
2yr
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journeyyyyyy_a
journeyyyyyy_aLv1

stop hating this fic is fire

2yr
1
topak
topakLv14

Your idiot,if your a dragon ball fan, ths fanfic doesn’t make any sense, it was super nerfed

journeyyyyyy_a:stop hating this fic is fire
2yr
36
DaoistyBAnjf
DaoistyBAnjfLv4

Goku after 100x gravity when he landed on namek had a power level of 90 000

Ozonelayer:What do you mean??
2yr
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DeleteYourself
DeleteYourselfLv3

You’re the reason why majority of everyone who doesn’t use webnovel thinks of us as idiotic incels

journeyyyyyy_a:stop hating this fic is fire
2yr
39
InsertaGoodName
InsertaGoodNameLv11

Most users are tho

DeleteYourself:You’re the reason why majority of everyone who doesn’t use webnovel thinks of us as idiotic incels
2yr
14
BigBangOrko
BigBangOrkoLv13

what does incel mean

DeleteYourself:You’re the reason why majority of everyone who doesn’t use webnovel thinks of us as idiotic incels
2yr
3
John_Ryan_8278
John_Ryan_8278Lv12

my sweet summar child

BigBangOrko:what does incel mean
1yr
11
BigBangOrko
BigBangOrkoLv13

wut ???

John_Ryan_8278:my sweet summar child
1yr
1
sagepotatoOAA
sagepotatoOAALv4

good man u are taiking thou truth

topak:Your idiot,if your a dragon ball fan, ths fanfic doesn’t make any sense, it was super nerfed
1yr
2
virusONtimez
virusONtimezLv12

It means don’t think about it

Ozonelayer:What do you mean??
1yr
1
Ireallylikereading
IreallylikereadingLv4

i dont know whatnincel means but what you said reminds me of summee time saga

John_Ryan_8278:my sweet summar child
1yr
Ireallylikereading
IreallylikereadingLv4

i dont know what incels means but what you said reminds me of that game summer time saga which was pretty ok not gonna lie

Ireallylikereading:i dont know whatnincel means but what you said reminds me of summee time saga
1yr
midgetydeath
midgetydeathLv4

I don't think "hate" means what you think it means.

journeyyyyyy_a:stop hating this fic is fire
11mth
midgetydeath
midgetydeathLv4

Nope. I'm entirely intentionally virgin. I don't want to be falsely accused of anything and I don't intend to get divorce-raped in family court.

InsertaGoodName:Most users are tho
11mth
Other Reviews
_BLANK_BLANK_
_BLANK_BLANK_Lv3

This review is only based on plot and plot holes. (I'm not giving it on writing quality or grammar as they aren't matter if the story itself doesn't have much.) So let's start. It start with. Author giving Mc overpowered wish. ( Lssj+ ancient ssj_ what ever that it) combined. ( which he patheticly Nerfed which I'll talk in a moment) Mc asked to be in an harsh environment( as in 10 to 100x planet Vegeta Gravity, and such which is actually good ( but wasn't executive properly) As his parents lived there for 4 year ( give or take few) and still had a pl under 50k Any dbz fan knows thats a heavy nerf ( goku in 6 days went from 9k to 90k iirc under same 100x gravity of earth and they have areas which have gravity over 20 x and more of P.V .. THATS 200 X of earth ) This story is Heavily surrounded by the element of Nerf to its characters. Unnecessary/ easily avoidable plot holes, and as much of fonon lore as author could add, which in tern makes the background of dbz meaningless. And if asked why such nerf, the answer is Mc won't have an opponent or such iirc from paragraph comments. And my question is then why gave LSSJ and the ancient Saiyan ( what ever that is but I expect it to be equally strong if not stronger) and what we get ? 25k BPL at birth, seriously? And after 4 years it around 140k . Thats all, I ain't gonna spoile more.

2yr

Immortal_Dao
Immortal_DaoLv2

I'm gonna tell that I'm agree with everything _BLANK_BLANK_ said , but I want to add something, and that is at sage's age, broly could fight with vegeta blue and goku blue, with this I mean that something better and stronger is expected from sage, but it seems that sage is a copy very nerfed of broly although sage is a fusion of the ancient and the legendary lineage.

2yr
InternetSaint
InternetSaintLv1

"God gives me wishes" story. ...... ...... ...... ...... ...... ...... ...... ...... ...... ...... ...... ...... ...... ...... ...... ...... ...... ...... ...... ...... ...... ...... ......

2yr
Tobi_One_Kenobi
Tobi_One_KenobiLv4

the way you write conversation and speech e.g Jake-"" yeah that was enough to put me off. someone commented on this in the second paragraph of the first chapter and you gave it a like, but on the second chapter you did the same thing. i tried to ignore but by chapter 15 i just couldnt handle it and skimmed to the end to see if you still continued and you did. so yeah 1 star, i could'nt enjoy anything. personally found it a complete waste of time

2yr
Dynamic321
Dynamic321Lv1

I think you should change the overpowered tag from weak to strong cause the Mc is so weak. The new version of the same name, and I think I would have been the most popular connection for it.

2yr
Fanfic_Lovers
Fanfic_LoversLv3

Not good Not good Not good Not good Not good Not good Not good Not good Not good Not good Not good Not goodNot good Not good Not good Not goodNot good Not good Not good Not good

2yr
MrShark123
MrShark123Lv4

so far I love this fic pls don't drop it. I hope you keep updating regularly..................... ..........................................

2yr
PainIsReality
PainIsRealityLv3

Ignore the power levels and how many times he nerfes charictors

2yr
Haku_Ouroboros
Haku_OuroborosLv4

No le bastaba con hacer al MC un mono literalmente, que también le puso como futura pareja un mujer con cola de serpiente sin piernas. Esto es creado por un fanático de los furros o que?

2yr
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