This review is only based on plot and plot holes. (I'm not giving it on writing quality or grammar as they aren't matter if the story itself doesn't have much.) So let's start. It start with. Author giving Mc overpowered wish. ( Lssj+ ancient ssj_ what ever that it) combined. ( which he patheticly Nerfed which I'll talk in a moment) Mc asked to be in an harsh environment( as in 10 to 100x planet Vegeta Gravity, and such which is actually good ( but wasn't executive properly) As his parents lived there for 4 year ( give or take few) and still had a pl under 50k Any dbz fan knows thats a heavy nerf ( goku in 6 days went from 9k to 90k iirc under same 100x gravity of earth and they have areas which have gravity over 20 x and more of P.V .. THATS 200 X of earth ) This story is Heavily surrounded by the element of Nerf to its characters. Unnecessary/ easily avoidable plot holes, and as much of fonon lore as author could add, which in tern makes the background of dbz meaningless. And if asked why such nerf, the answer is Mc won't have an opponent or such iirc from paragraph comments. And my question is then why gave LSSJ and the ancient Saiyan ( what ever that is but I expect it to be equally strong if not stronger) and what we get ? 25k BPL at birth, seriously? And after 4 years it around 140k . Thats all, I ain't gonna spoile more.

As long as you don't use your brain or look at the numbers he uses then it can be an alright novel... ,.......................................

I'm gonna tell that I'm agree with everything _BLANK_BLANK_ said , but I want to add something, and that is at sage's age, broly could fight with vegeta blue and goku blue, with this I mean that something better and stronger is expected from sage, but it seems that sage is a copy very nerfed of broly although sage is a fusion of the ancient and the legendary lineage.

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the way you write conversation and speech e.g Jake-"" yeah that was enough to put me off. someone commented on this in the second paragraph of the first chapter and you gave it a like, but on the second chapter you did the same thing. i tried to ignore but by chapter 15 i just couldnt handle it and skimmed to the end to see if you still continued and you did. so yeah 1 star, i could'nt enjoy anything. personally found it a complete waste of time

I think you should change the overpowered tag from weak to strong cause the Mc is so weak. The new version of the same name, and I think I would have been the most popular connection for it.

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Ignore the power levels and how many times he nerfes charictors

No le bastaba con hacer al MC un mono literalmente, que también le puso como futura pareja un mujer con cola de serpiente sin piernas. Esto es creado por un fanático de los furros o que?