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InternetSaint
InternetSaintLv12yr
2022-05-26 17:18

"God gives me wishes" story. ...... ...... ...... ...... ...... ...... ...... ...... ...... ...... ...... ...... ...... ...... ...... ...... ...... ...... ...... ...... ...... ...... ......

Dragon ball Z: A True Saiyan

Ozonelayer
4.1
169 Chs

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Kapuchinik
KapuchinikLv5

Lol, and? 😂

2yr
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InternetSaint
InternetSaintLv1

yes, and? are you mad?

Kapuchinik:Lol, and? 😂
2yr
5
AnimeReader_player
AnimeReader_playerLv4

I think he is not mad, It just that you saying some nonsense and pls say some review we didn't understand why u didn't like it? .

InternetSaint:yes, and? are you mad?
2yr
10
AlphaZwei
AlphaZweiLv5

Where is the review?

InternetSaint:yes, and? are you mad?
2yr
9
InternetSaint
InternetSaintLv1

are you stupid?

AnimeReader_player:I think he is not mad, It just that you saying some nonsense and pls say some review we didn't understand why u didn't like it? .
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2yr
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ArthurCE10
ArthurCE10Lv4

Bruh, this is not a review at all, at least tell us what's wrong with the story or why you didn't like it.

InternetSaint:are you stupid?
2yr
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InternetSaint
InternetSaintLv1

I already did. You should stop being so mad about it.

ArthurCE10:Bruh, this is not a review at all, at least tell us what's wrong with the story or why you didn't like it.
2yr
5
AnimeReader_player
AnimeReader_playerLv4

Uh so you saying because is god giving wishes?

InternetSaint:I already did. You should stop being so mad about it.
2yr
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AnimeReader_player
AnimeReader_playerLv4

No you are. I'm sorry its annoying if someone say stupid even though your the one is lol

InternetSaint:are you stupid?
2yr
7
InternetSaint
InternetSaintLv1

You is english speaks well.

AnimeReader_player:Uh so you saying because is god giving wishes?
2yr
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InternetSaint
InternetSaintLv1

I bet you get called stupid a lot. That is why this makes you mad.

AnimeReader_player:No you are. I'm sorry its annoying if someone say stupid even though your the one is lol
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2yr
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AnimeReader_player
AnimeReader_playerLv4

Nah I'm not, but are you?

InternetSaint:I bet you get called stupid a lot. That is why this makes you mad.
2yr
4
AnimeReader_player
AnimeReader_playerLv4

I'm not mad, but annoyed a person stupid as you say that. You know what say your opinion why you didn't like it i might consider not stupid.

InternetSaint:I bet you get called stupid a lot. That is why this makes you mad.
2yr
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Eins_Mensch
Eins_MenschLv14

When you dont like such fanfic types, then you are on the wrong plattform... this one here is dominated by System, reincarnation, transmigration, wish fullfilment and Wishes because god made a mistake (or similar) type fanfics.

2yr
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InternetSaint
InternetSaintLv1

Are you stupid? If it is here then it will of course also get riposted elsewhere.

Eins_Mensch:When you dont like such fanfic types, then you are on the wrong plattform... this one here is dominated by System, reincarnation, transmigration, wish fullfilment and Wishes because god made a mistake (or similar) type fanfics.
2yr
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Eins_Mensch
Eins_MenschLv14

rarely, i never saw a copied fanfiction from someone here on other plattform and the original author normal only post the fanfiction on one site and when they cross poste or reposte, it is often mentioned in either description, AN or chapter end. The chinese novels are the exception, i have no idea whats up with that. And No, im not stupid, are you?

InternetSaint:Are you stupid? If it is here then it will of course also get riposted elsewhere.
2yr
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Sin_of_GREED
Sin_of_GREEDLv14

well looks like he can't complete s sentence with using stupid in it so probably something like ocd maybe

Eins_Mensch:rarely, i never saw a copied fanfiction from someone here on other plattform and the original author normal only post the fanfiction on one site and when they cross poste or reposte, it is often mentioned in either description, AN or chapter end. The chinese novels are the exception, i have no idea whats up with that. And No, im not stupid, are you?
2yr
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Kapuchinik
KapuchinikLv5

"Do not argue with a fool. He will drag you down to his level and beat you with experience."

Sin_of_GREED:well looks like he can't complete s sentence with using stupid in it so probably something like ocd maybe
2yr
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Sin_of_GREED
Sin_of_GREEDLv14

agreed i just experienced it 😅

Kapuchinik:"Do not argue with a fool. He will drag you down to his level and beat you with experience."
2yr
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Other Reviews
_BLANK_BLANK_
_BLANK_BLANK_Lv3

This review is only based on plot and plot holes. (I'm not giving it on writing quality or grammar as they aren't matter if the story itself doesn't have much.) So let's start. It start with. Author giving Mc overpowered wish. ( Lssj+ ancient ssj_ what ever that it) combined. ( which he patheticly Nerfed which I'll talk in a moment) Mc asked to be in an harsh environment( as in 10 to 100x planet Vegeta Gravity, and such which is actually good ( but wasn't executive properly) As his parents lived there for 4 year ( give or take few) and still had a pl under 50k Any dbz fan knows thats a heavy nerf ( goku in 6 days went from 9k to 90k iirc under same 100x gravity of earth and they have areas which have gravity over 20 x and more of P.V .. THATS 200 X of earth ) This story is Heavily surrounded by the element of Nerf to its characters. Unnecessary/ easily avoidable plot holes, and as much of fonon lore as author could add, which in tern makes the background of dbz meaningless. And if asked why such nerf, the answer is Mc won't have an opponent or such iirc from paragraph comments. And my question is then why gave LSSJ and the ancient Saiyan ( what ever that is but I expect it to be equally strong if not stronger) and what we get ? 25k BPL at birth, seriously? And after 4 years it around 140k . Thats all, I ain't gonna spoile more.

2yr

AnAxeToGrind
AnAxeToGrindLv5

As long as you don't use your brain or look at the numbers he uses then it can be an alright novel... ,.......................................

2yr
Immortal_Dao
Immortal_DaoLv2

I'm gonna tell that I'm agree with everything _BLANK_BLANK_ said , but I want to add something, and that is at sage's age, broly could fight with vegeta blue and goku blue, with this I mean that something better and stronger is expected from sage, but it seems that sage is a copy very nerfed of broly although sage is a fusion of the ancient and the legendary lineage.

2yr
Tobi_One_Kenobi
Tobi_One_KenobiLv4

the way you write conversation and speech e.g Jake-"" yeah that was enough to put me off. someone commented on this in the second paragraph of the first chapter and you gave it a like, but on the second chapter you did the same thing. i tried to ignore but by chapter 15 i just couldnt handle it and skimmed to the end to see if you still continued and you did. so yeah 1 star, i could'nt enjoy anything. personally found it a complete waste of time

2yr
Dynamic321
Dynamic321Lv1

I think you should change the overpowered tag from weak to strong cause the Mc is so weak. The new version of the same name, and I think I would have been the most popular connection for it.

2yr
Fanfic_Lovers
Fanfic_LoversLv3

Not good Not good Not good Not good Not good Not good Not good Not good Not good Not good Not good Not goodNot good Not good Not good Not goodNot good Not good Not good Not good

2yr
MrShark123
MrShark123Lv4

so far I love this fic pls don't drop it. I hope you keep updating regularly..................... ..........................................

2yr
PainIsReality
PainIsRealityLv3

Ignore the power levels and how many times he nerfes charictors

2yr
Haku_Ouroboros
Haku_OuroborosLv4

No le bastaba con hacer al MC un mono literalmente, que también le puso como futura pareja un mujer con cola de serpiente sin piernas. Esto es creado por un fanático de los furros o que?

2yr
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