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HangerBaby
HangerBabyLv42yr
2022-05-31 15:31

The fic could be good but the author has this weird fascination with female looking males as I guess he doesn't understand the perfect male has a deep voice, a square jaw, and a more square face with rigid sword like eyebrows. It's to the point where most characters refer to the MC as a girl🤮👎👎👎👎👎👎.

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DadhieBear
DadhieBearAuthor

If you have read the novel I clearly stated for several chapters that he is perfected by his skill as a being, not a perfect man, no useless difference between gender was retained. Your review is baseless and clearly, you haven't read it yet. Thanks anyway.

HangerBaby
HangerBabyLv4

its not baseless youre a freak who likes to screw guys that look like girls and you try to force it on others

DadhieBear:If you have read the novel I clearly stated for several chapters that he is perfected by his skill as a being, not a perfect man, no useless difference between gender was retained. Your review is baseless and clearly, you haven't read it yet. Thanks anyway.
OllieZ
OllieZLv6

What forcing? Just don't read it. If you really like masculine man, you go watch videos of muscled men doing macho activities

HangerBaby:its not baseless youre a freak who likes to screw guys that look like girls and you try to force it on others
Kevin_Pollard
Kevin_PollardLv4

I found your perfect man

Kevin_Pollard
Kevin_PollardLv4

Macho~

OllieZ:What forcing? Just don't read it. If you really like masculine man, you go watch videos of muscled men doing macho activities
Pythia
PythiaLv11

I never knew there were people like this alive... thanks for expanding my world view and making me lose just that little bit of hope i had left for humanity. Heres the men you love so much

HangerBaby
HangerBabyLv4

i never knew peoples fascination with stomping out what makes men men and end masculinity. i knew they were out there but not nearly this common👎

Pythia:I never knew there were people like this alive... thanks for expanding my world view and making me lose just that little bit of hope i had left for humanity. Heres the men you love so much
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HangerBaby
HangerBabyLv4

truly you have

Kevin_Pollard:I found your perfect man
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Pythia
PythiaLv11

I'd pay to see what you look like IRL. I can guarantee you most likely the complete opposite of the 'ideal' man. you'r behaviour alone proves it

HangerBaby:i never knew peoples fascination with stomping out what makes men men and end masculinity. i knew they were out there but not nearly this common👎
HangerBaby
HangerBabyLv4

i regularly watch cbum while i hit the gym 4x mr olympia shows you what the perfect male being is

OllieZ:What forcing? Just don't read it. If you really like masculine man, you go watch videos of muscled men doing macho activities
Matheus_Pascheto
Matheus_PaschetoLv4

if you have a problem just dont read.

HangerBaby
HangerBabyLv4

👎 weak sauce

Matheus_Pascheto:if you have a problem just dont read.
HangerBaby
HangerBabyLv4

😂 how disappointed youd be.

Pythia:I'd pay to see what you look like IRL. I can guarantee you most likely the complete opposite of the 'ideal' man. you'r behaviour alone proves it
AbelWizard
AbelWizardLv3

LOL

Kevin_Pollard:I found your perfect man
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Pythia
PythiaLv11

The use of emojis enhances my already extreme doubt.

HangerBaby:😂 how disappointed youd be.
HangerBaby
HangerBabyLv4

thats alright😂

Pythia:The use of emojis enhances my already extreme doubt.
Sin_of_GREED
Sin_of_GREEDLv14

so he doesn't have any s ex organs right(perfect being not male/man) ? i haven't read this but this quite a important factor for me atleast

DadhieBear:If you have read the novel I clearly stated for several chapters that he is perfected by his skill as a being, not a perfect man, no useless difference between gender was retained. Your review is baseless and clearly, you haven't read it yet. Thanks anyway.
AuthoriTet
AuthoriTetLv4

HangerBaby:i regularly watch cbum while i hit the gym 4x mr olympia shows you what the perfect male being is
shirou_sureiya
shirou_sureiyaLv4

hahahahahhahahahah

Kevin_Pollard:I found your perfect man
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shirou_sureiya
shirou_sureiyaLv4

hahahahahha

Pythia:I never knew there were people like this alive... thanks for expanding my world view and making me lose just that little bit of hope i had left for humanity. Heres the men you love so much
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