OllieZ

She killed Jino's father??? I hope he takes it well and doesn't leave Rygar's side because of this...

As a non-native English reader, I find it harder and harder to understand your new writing style. I hope the story doesn't turn into crack.

What about fuinjutsu?

I love the pacing and that you kept some of the OG Jiraiya personality (I am still waiting for the MC to notice though). Thanks! And good luck with the story!

Will Harrenhall (it should be renamed) become the new Royal Stark Seat and Winterfell for the Heir to rule? Like King's Landing and Dragonstone.

Isn't Rygar a bit suspicious about Hitogami and the Greyrats? Since the start, whenever Hitogami interferes, it ends up being related to the Greyrat family or Orsted.