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Demonzor
DemonzorLv142yr
2022-06-12 15:18

This story is a normal below average Webnovel fanfic. The mc is kinda garbage has nothing that makes you wanna read about him. The other characters aren’t good either.the other thing that makes bad other then the mc and side characters is how terrible the author is at explaining how he is doing stuff like how he can use the powers of the characters from league

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DadhieBear
DadhieBearAuthor

I understand the lack of taste with this novel as I'm still new and this is my first novel however about the power I think I already use almost 15 chapters explaining it. Anyway i appreciate it and i really like this kind of review!

The_Anonymous_User
The_Anonymous_UserLv4

harem or non harem?

DadhieBear:I understand the lack of taste with this novel as I'm still new and this is my first novel however about the power I think I already use almost 15 chapters explaining it. Anyway i appreciate it and i really like this kind of review!
AndellOfficial
AndellOfficialLv13

Harmen.

The_Anonymous_User:harem or non harem?
Rimuru9Tempest
Rimuru9TempestLv4

don't minmind him author san. . i support you

DadhieBear:I understand the lack of taste with this novel as I'm still new and this is my first novel however about the power I think I already use almost 15 chapters explaining it. Anyway i appreciate it and i really like this kind of review!
Daoist7IUsUu
Daoist7IUsUuLv4

then why don't you create one yourself? atleast we can see how will you create a better story and character development not just all talk .your making the author do something out of his/her comfort zone.

Honoured_Writer
Honoured_WriterLv4

Rimuru9Tempest:don't minmind him author san. . i support you
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