Yo, I’m going to say it, this is the next RSSG. The this book is really good. Everyone has to give power stones. I’m already hooked on this book💯 only thing I can see, is that it’s missing some elements to make the book more full. It dwells a bit empty? Idk the right words but I’ll write another review when I find them

I absolutely love this book, its been 33 chapters and i feel like a review should be written about this great story. Even though its only just at its beginning, i feel like the author has done a really great job in making it work. Now i dont want to say this is the best or even one of the best. As everyone has different likes and dislikes and personally this novel has (atleast till now) everything that i like, so i am going to mention what i liked about this novel and if you find you might also like some of the stuff I mentioned give this novel a try you might enjoy it. 1. The MC wakes up in the past with memories of his future. Basically its a second chance novel ( I absolutely love this trope). 2. The MC has his priorities right and doesn't delay matters and handles them with caution and due diligence. 3. He is not a perfect person doesn't know alot of stuff and is trying his best to learn and make up for his weaknesses 4. The author tries alot of things related to game which i haven't seen before much atleast on webnovel originals. 5. It reminds of Rebirth of the Strongest Sword God, which is definitely in my 10 top webnovel list. So yeah i love this book. Note for author: Love your work 😁👍 Hope you are contracted soon for this novel and you put out more chapters faster cause its good.

Author here. This is my wsa addition, and a book that I spent a lot of time trying to perfect. Although I don't dare claim that it is, I think that this is a well written book. There will be guild building, op mc, absolutely no harem, and good progression, I promise. and ever since I finished my exams, I have also tried my best to maintain a 2 chapter a day release cycle. I think that you will love the book as long as u give it a chance.

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This book has a lot of pros but the cons have started to outweigh then IMO. I have read until chapter 250 so I can say objectively that the story has a lot going for it story wise but when you pad your word count on literally every single chapter with a notice not to pirate, which will happen regardless, then I lose trust in your integrity as an author. (I understand not wanting your hard work to be given away for free but I shouldn't have to pay for your insecurity.) Second, filler chapters and filler content to pad the word count... With the amount of information that is nonrepetative in the 250 chapters I read you could have gotten the message across in half that number. That said, I do enjoy the concept and ideas you have but they need to be executed more efficiently. (Yes I understand that most webnovels are padded with repetition and filler but that doesn't make it right, does it?) With some slight tweaking and focusing more on story development rather than useless banter between characters then this story could be great.

Right at the start, you are captured by the I justices of this new world. The author knows just how to bring you in to the plot and make your ant to see the underdog rise. Fight and push forward with our loveable MC, you won’t regret watching him become a complete bad**s ! Definitely worth the read. Just remember to bug the author for more chapters or else you’ll binge it all.

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This is trying to be RSSG with a rushed storyline and significantly less explanation. Honestly you might as well just go read RSSG. The writing QUALITY, insofar as grammar and punctuation, is fairly well done. EVERYTHING else is NOT. I don't want to spoil anything for someone who might actually enjoy the novel, but I will say the author is a half-step away from the plagiarism realm, and doesn't seem to care. The separate, clean living area for the rich? "'Shadow' King"? "Bright 'Horizon'"? You're not even trying to be subtle about it, man. E for Effort I guess, at least for getting a few hundred chapters out and sticking with it. If you meant this to be a quick rewrite of Lucky Old Cat's original work, then ignore me. If you meant this to be original in any way, shape or form? No.

This is my first time writing a review for a book and I can say that this has a lot of potential.It has been a while since I read about a non-dumb mc and this gives me a different feeling compared to the other VRMMORPG novels and it gives a fresh feeling.Continue the good work author.