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jdbeue
jdbeueAuthor2yr
2022-07-07 06:40

Author here. This is my wsa addition, and a book that I spent a lot of time trying to perfect. Although I don't dare claim that it is, I think that this is a well written book. There will be guild building, op mc, absolutely no harem, and good progression, I promise. and ever since I finished my exams, I have also tried my best to maintain a 2 chapter a day release cycle. I think that you will love the book as long as u give it a chance.

World Online

jdbeue
4.2
304 Chs

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FallenAngeI
FallenAngeILv13

Is there romance?

2yr
jdbeue
jdbeueAuthor

not a huge expert, so not at the moment

FallenAngeI:Is there romance?
2yr
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FallenAngeI
FallenAngeILv13

As in No Romance for the whole novel, or just late romance? I just find very few novels without romance interesting in the long run, so just wanted to know for sure.

jdbeue:not a huge expert, so not at the moment
2yr
6
jdbeue
jdbeueAuthor

ah, keep reading, I don't want to reveal when or where

FallenAngeI:As in No Romance for the whole novel, or just late romance? I just find very few novels without romance interesting in the long run, so just wanted to know for sure.
2yr
jdbeue
jdbeueAuthor

I promise this will be a good read

FallenAngeI:Is there romance?
2yr
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Vladmir_Putin
Vladmir_PutinLv2

Harem?

2yr
Vladmir_Putin
Vladmir_PutinLv2

Harem?

jdbeue:I promise this will be a good read
2yr
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jdbeue
jdbeueAuthor

no

Vladmir_Putin:Harem?
2yr
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HaremLover222
HaremLover222Lv4

No harem😔

2yr
1
Daoist1qnqr5
Daoist1qnqr5Lv11

Jake said that in the game he doesn't really die, so how did he die?

2yr
1
Robert_Tene_5577
Robert_Tene_5577Lv1

Hey man! Is ther a discord group for this that we could join?

2yr
its_L
its_LLv4

Romance or not i could care less but if it's not harem then I can read it with peace of mind

jdbeue:no
2yr
3
Purvi_Arora_5341
Purvi_Arora_5341Lv1

when will you release chapters of your previous novel "recarnition in the cultivation world with a system"??? I am eagerly looking forward for it...

2yr
1
Brad_Brown_9510
Brad_Brown_9510Lv1

u lost some marks for no harem ahahahahaha but neverless good book

2yr
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DarkX24
DarkX24Lv12

As long as there's no romance I can read in peace, some books just don't need it and just seems forced

2yr
3
Jorge_Correa
Jorge_CorreaLv15

Only 4 chaps a week?

2yr
Vlad_Weighman
Vlad_WeighmanLv2

the plot is confusing, game just started and there's already rumours of epic item appearing? How's that possible? the story is great keep it up man , just annoyed bout some flaw here and there , don't stop writing though I mean we cannot be perfect that's understandable

2yr
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Revarius
RevariusLv15

Any chance of you picking this book back up or are you just busy?

1yr
Tig3rs3ye_17
Tig3rs3ye_17Lv11

cannot do much about it now, but the epic items and classes are given a certain rarity but the author doesn't gobe them justice, honestly it seems a bit rushed to me, also author doesn't talk about epic items with levels? the legendary armor will be upgraded with mc but all epic items will be the same stats forever unless it's a class weapon but author didn't mention anything about getting "better" and higher stats epic items than the current ones

1yr
VoidBuddha
VoidBuddhaLv4

How many novels have you even read without it cause the number of novels I have read without it can be counted on my 10 fingers for me. I want novels which completely avoid romance but it seems like I'm in the minority so nobody does so. You talk like there are plenty. I hope this one just avoids it.

FallenAngeI:As in No Romance for the whole novel, or just late romance? I just find very few novels without romance interesting in the long run, so just wanted to know for sure.
1yr
1
Other Reviews
RealDarkSeraph
RealDarkSeraphLv15

Yo, I’m going to say it, this is the next RSSG. The this book is really good. Everyone has to give power stones. I’m already hooked on this book💯 only thing I can see, is that it’s missing some elements to make the book more full. It dwells a bit empty? Idk the right words but I’ll write another review when I find them

3yr

TheRamenLord
TheRamenLordLv13

I absolutely love this book, its been 33 chapters and i feel like a review should be written about this great story. Even though its only just at its beginning, i feel like the author has done a really great job in making it work. Now i dont want to say this is the best or even one of the best. As everyone has different likes and dislikes and personally this novel has (atleast till now) everything that i like, so i am going to mention what i liked about this novel and if you find you might also like some of the stuff I mentioned give this novel a try you might enjoy it. 1. The MC wakes up in the past with memories of his future. Basically its a second chance novel ( I absolutely love this trope). 2. The MC has his priorities right and doesn't delay matters and handles them with caution and due diligence. 3. He is not a perfect person doesn't know alot of stuff and is trying his best to learn and make up for his weaknesses 4. The author tries alot of things related to game which i haven't seen before much atleast on webnovel originals. 5. It reminds of Rebirth of the Strongest Sword God, which is definitely in my 10 top webnovel list. So yeah i love this book. Note for author: Love your work 😁👍 Hope you are contracted soon for this novel and you put out more chapters faster cause its good.

2yr
RafaelMitz
RafaelMitzLv3

Reveal spoiler

2yr
Mzeeddz
MzeeddzLv4

Another novel with the same old plot, get every1 inside a VRMMO, make the protagonist be a nobody then send him back in time, still waiting for a novel where the protagonist will be someone great without having knowledge of the future... Anyway with no romance/cute interactions and no life outside the gaming world, this feels like a cultivation novel where the MC cultivates for 1000 years and we read 10k chapters of the same thing happening over and over again, plot isn't very interesting either so...

2yr
Slackr
SlackrLv15

This book has a lot of pros but the cons have started to outweigh then IMO. I have read until chapter 250 so I can say objectively that the story has a lot going for it story wise but when you pad your word count on literally every single chapter with a notice not to pirate, which will happen regardless, then I lose trust in your integrity as an author. (I understand not wanting your hard work to be given away for free but I shouldn't have to pay for your insecurity.) Second, filler chapters and filler content to pad the word count... With the amount of information that is nonrepetative in the 250 chapters I read you could have gotten the message across in half that number. That said, I do enjoy the concept and ideas you have but they need to be executed more efficiently. (Yes I understand that most webnovels are padded with repetition and filler but that doesn't make it right, does it?) With some slight tweaking and focusing more on story development rather than useless banter between characters then this story could be great.

2yr
1King_Rep1
1King_Rep1Lv15

Right at the start, you are captured by the I justices of this new world. The author knows just how to bring you in to the plot and make your ant to see the underdog rise. Fight and push forward with our loveable MC, you won’t regret watching him become a complete bad**s ! Definitely worth the read. Just remember to bug the author for more chapters or else you’ll binge it all.

3yr
I_am_rawking1
I_am_rawking1Lv2

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2yr
Snoflake
SnoflakeLv14

This is trying to be RSSG with a rushed storyline and significantly less explanation. Honestly you might as well just go read RSSG. The writing QUALITY, insofar as grammar and punctuation, is fairly well done. EVERYTHING else is NOT. I don't want to spoil anything for someone who might actually enjoy the novel, but I will say the author is a half-step away from the plagiarism realm, and doesn't seem to care. The separate, clean living area for the rich? "'Shadow' King"? "Bright 'Horizon'"? You're not even trying to be subtle about it, man. E for Effort I guess, at least for getting a few hundred chapters out and sticking with it. If you meant this to be a quick rewrite of Lucky Old Cat's original work, then ignore me. If you meant this to be original in any way, shape or form? No.

2yr
Binge_Reader_Hash
Binge_Reader_HashLv13

This is my first time writing a review for a book and I can say that this has a lot of potential.It has been a while since I read about a non-dumb mc and this gives me a different feeling compared to the other VRMMORPG novels and it gives a fresh feeling.Continue the good work author.

2yr
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