Overall I’d say pretty good, one thing I appreciate is that the writing and grammar is readable without egregious mistakes. World setting and character design is fairly in depth and thorough although sometimes I find myself lost in terms of the different powers of stuff. Sure the author has clearly laid out the power structure but it’s easy to forget when switching between colors and tiers and the “well this person has a tier 3 core but their attacks are tier 4” idk maybe it’s just me but I find it confusing. A word of caution, this book is nauseatingly cliche, I won’t take away stars for it because it was warned at the beginning but sometimes I find myself just wanting to skip the long sections of cliche wholesomeness. Personally I’d like to see a bit darker of a setting with more conflict.
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