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2022-05-19 16:14

Good novel, great story telling. Though seems a bit generic, it still got me hooked. The writing needs a bit of improvement but overall, good job. I wish you luck, author :)

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Thanks sir good(shameless) hippo. As you have pointed out many times, I'm working on improving everything. I know I'm still lacking many things, I...know. And I will try my best to improve them. (Thanks for everything!)

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